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Reviewer: Storyreader21 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2019 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 7: Let's get goin

Nice chapter. Is it bad that I hope Roy ends up inside mimi's mouth as she eats, and is actually swallowed(finally)? Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

     Storyreader, that's not bad at all! Haha!

Reviewer: Gershwin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 08 2019 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 7: Let's get goin

Really enjoying this story. The relationship seems cute and somewhat realistic in it pacing. I look forward to the eventual payoff! I personally hope the eventual vore remains “fun” and not the “killed for a brief moment of pleasure” variety, but it’s your story and I’ll enjoy it either way.

Author's Response:

     Thank you so much for that Gershwin! I will continue to do my best with this! I also hope everyone is pleased with the eventual pay off haha!

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