[Report This]Date: April 06 2022 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 4: Lets Talk About What Happened.
This chapter was both hot and heartwarmingly sweet.
The mouth scenario is extremely hot. More than unware giantess I love the idea of unaware tiny. A tiny who Don't know that he is trapped in a tummy or mouth.
Also the Roy and Mimi moment are extremely sweet. It shows how a tiny giantess relationship can create a compelling romance story.
Even if it had no vore scenario I still would have read and would have given it full review just for the detailed romance story between a tiny and a giantess.
Author's Response:
Thank you for that. I really want them to feel real ya know? I love Mimi and Roy and I hope that shows.
I love vore overall, but I would consider making a story without it. The story can still be sexy even without it.
Thank you so much for the review.
Date: September 14 2018 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 4: Lets Talk About What Happened.
Really enjoy the story - look forward to seeing it continue
Author's Response:
Thanks!
It's something I fully intend to see through to the end!
[Report This]Date: September 03 2018 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 4: Lets Talk About What Happened.
You’re right. Quite the lengthy chapter. It was written so well that I finished reading it rather quickly.
The whole “huge” and “giant” conversation was kinda annoying. Mimi should be able to understand that this all new to Roy and he is taking in a lot at once. When I first read this, I thought Mimi was genuinely teasing Roy about calling her huge, but she was actually angry which felt somewhat silly. In Roy’s perspective, she is huge. Of course he isn’t talking about her figure. This could have been a comical moment, so I was surprised to see this result in anger in Mimi.
I loved Roy’s description of his “dream”. It’s pretty accurate and a good way of describing a mouth. Used words such as slimy to describe texture, and also when you mention the restriction of movement when things got tighter. Loved it.
There is only one problem with this cliffhanger. I should be scared/nervous of Roy getting eaten, but I’m not. In the end notes, you say it’s still the first day so I know Roy is going to survive and is most likely going to have all his limbs intact. Only thing that might happen is a quick scare, but that’s all. Even if Roy gets swallowed, I don’t fear it. He stated he was invincible so the journey down his best friend might be fun for him.
Otherwise a good chapter. We had back to back mouth and vore stuff so far, and I would love to see other things included.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you again Speedy for your review! I really didn't mind having such a lengthy chapter. It gave me time to add some fan service without it being forced or shoehorned in. The only problem is it takes longer to write. Lol
As for the "Huge" conversation it was indeed meant to be funny. Lol I really do appreciate what you said though. This will help for future chapters and stories.
Date: September 03 2018 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 4: Lets Talk About What Happened.
Nice chapter. I really hope Mimi doesn't notice Roy until after she finishes the sandwhich, and has already swallowed Roy. As well as that Roy lives but has to come out the other side. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll do my best not to dissapoint!