[Report This]Date: April 06 2022 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 3: Mimi's Mini Mistake
Loved this chapter. I especially love it when the one who is suppose to protect you, lost themself to lust and pleasure and turn Against you. It's just so hot to think about.
Mimi and Roy are practically soul mate. But will their deep bond save Roy from becoming a tiny treat?
Author's Response:
Only time will tell! ;D
Here is hoping both parties can be satisfied.
Date: September 30 2018 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 3: Mimi's Mini Mistake
This story is great so far! (As of September 30th 2018) I just really hope to see more soon. Been checking back, can't wait.
Personally, the more vore teasing, the better for sure. Not sure if it's in the plan, but if Sarah ends up finding Roy, vore teasing with her too would be amazing! Have a great night.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I try really hard to prolong the vore situations! Though sometimes I am just tempted to let Mimi have Roy! Haha
As for Sarah.. I have big plans for her! She will definitely be making an appearance soon.
You have a good night too buddy!
Date: July 25 2018 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 3: Mimi's Mini Mistake
Excellent progress
Author's Response:
And with that a break that lasted a month!
Hahaha sorry for the wait. I am going to try and speed up again. Wanna pump this out!
[Report This]Date: July 25 2018 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 3: Mimi's Mini Mistake
Well, not much happened in this chapter, but I love how Mimi is starting to get some crazy ideas. Makes me wonder what she will try next. Loved how she thought "anywhere on my body...". I'm hoping she meant someplace below her waist, haha.
Well, you answered all my doubts on Sarah having all this access. Her parents told her to check in Mimi and Sarah also has a key. I like her suspicious behaviour, but her attitude feels like a little kid than someone older than them. Kids usually tease about people starting relationships and making fun of that. I think someone older might do a slight tease and add some advice here and there. I liked how Sarah said that she would keep Roy in her bed. That's something an older person would say. Would love to see some more of that.
Gotta agree with rhino. How did Roy sleep through the boob bouncy house and also sleep through the throat tunnel of terror. One of those rides should have woken him up. Lol.
I'm hoping Mimi begins to do more naughty things to Roy and also have more confidence when she does it. She seems hesistant and I would love to see her fantasies and lust take over. We got a glimpse of that when she almost swallowed him. Perhaps there are another pair of lips further down her body that would like to swallow Roy too.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Mimi definetly gonna be *ahem* using Roy a bit more in the future. We still have 11 more days for them to play. Haha!
Also I am glad you like Sarah though. Gotta make use of her too!
[Report This]Date: July 25 2018 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 3: Mimi's Mini Mistake
Nice update, I think Roy is the heaviest sleeper in the history of mankind. I'd be kicking myself if I slept through that. Just curious if Sarah is gonna have some other roll besides the annoying nieghbor? I definitely like their alone times, doesn't seem like Mimi can resist much longer! Keep it going!
Author's Response:
Gotta say. I kinda want his heavy sleeping to be a character troupe of his now.
As for Sarah she will definetly be back no worries.
[Report This]Date: July 25 2018 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 3: Mimi's Mini Mistake
Bahaha, nice xD
Author's Response:
Hahaha! Alliteration. Love it.
Date: July 25 2018 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 3: Mimi's Mini Mistake
Thank you so much!
I have amways wanted to make likeable characters in a story.
Author's Response:
*Always
Sorry tiny screen keyboard
[Report This]Date: July 25 2018 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 3: Mimi's Mini Mistake
They are so cute together. Now let's hope that pesky Sarah doesn't ruin everything!
I think this is one of the unexpectedly very good stories on this website, thank you for writing it and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for enjoying. I am really liking them together too!