Reviews For Officers Down!
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Reviewer: meereten01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2018 2:50 PM Title: Officers Down!

Thank you for the fan service!

The story is very well written I think.

I must admit that these officers look like the first people that actually have no choice but to walk right into Fulda's trap, they had to to do their job, a pity for them and a win for us / some sorority sisters.

But killing cops will bring the motherload of cops, but I think Fulda and Li have enough intellectual power to convince the mayor to let the police look the other way.

Thanks for writing and I'm looking forward to your next story/chapter!



Author's Response:

Always a pleasure to know I have fans!

 

It may have been their jobs, but the girls have too much to risk letting them get back.  Maybe the next group will be larger and better prepared.  Though with all the money their families have they may get police to drop the investigation entirely.

 

As always, thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2018 2:00 AM Title: Officers Down!

About time the police investigated all these sororities with shrinking power/tech/magic.

 

College girls: America's #1 problem!



Author's Response:

A sobering reminder of what happens if you go into a situation unprepared for magic.

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