Date: July 15 2018 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
I don't review stuff often, but I thought it was criminal how few reviews this had and had to say something. This was a fantastic work, with a great idea that was executed brilliantly. I'm usually not a fan of such big size differences but I thought you did an amazing job having a connection between the two and really pulling in the reader to make them feel both sides of the story. Really well done and I look forward to reading more of your work!