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Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2018 12:50 AM Title: Introduction

How about one where a tall girl is entered into a limbo contest? She is surprised to find that every time she goes under the limbo she shrinks a bit. In order to regain her size she has to win. She ends up facing a short girl that is amazing at limbo.

The shrinking is unnoticeable to everyone except for the tall girl herself.

The short girl can either get ticked off and get rid of the shrunken girl, or find some way to get her disqualified or cheat to win. This causes the girl to become stuck at her new size.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the idea!  Unfortunately it doesn't fit with the themes I plan to cover, and with a limited pool of characters it would be unwise to use one for this, in addition to rendering her unusable for future stories.

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