Reviews For A New Society
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Reviewer: littlemac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2018 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: This will be on the test

Off to a great start. Keep going!

Reviewer: Moti0n Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2018 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 1: This will be on the test

Nice :-) hope for more

Reviewer: shaka Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2018 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: This will be on the test

In a society like this, men should be worn like fashion accessories (rings, necklaces, high heels, etc.) by women.  After all, what good is power if you can't show off your humiliated males in public.



Author's Response:

I like this suggestion a lot, I'll probably work it in during a future chapter - thanks for reading

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2018 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: This will be on the test

Really interesting premise for a story.  I'm kinda mixed on the brother-sister aspect; but it could be fun humiliation in the context of Hannah having told Jeff he's more like a pet than a person, and the butt / entrapement listing in your story description. 

Please continue.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2018 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 1: This will be on the test

Loved the beginning. Using the satellites to shrink all males is a great plan. I was hoping the teacher would come in and buy him. Your story is well written and interesting.

Reviewer: Odysseus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2018 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: This will be on the test

Great start! Excited to see Hannah play with him, but also to see the perspectives of some other times in this universe. A sorority house where they use tiny guys as part of their hazing rituals sounds like fun to me. 

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