Date: September 11 2018 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Such a fantastic start to the story! Do you plan on continuing it?!
Hi thanks for your comment. Directing this to you and others who have sent very nice words of encouragement since the last update. Needed to walk away from this for a while but I've been working on drafts for this story and will start posting some updates to this one starting today or tomorrow.
Date: August 02 2018 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really love this story and wanted to check to see if you had plans to continue. I really love the willingness of the mother juxtaposed to his reluctance. I also echo other comments about wishing to see more feet included. Looking forward to reading more!
Date: July 12 2018 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
Very much enjoying the direction you are taking it. I wasn’t bothered by the original set up you were moving with but understand the change. A slow, more realistic slide into the dominant role for a young woman that is still coming into her own makes for a much better read. If she was older and more experienced, I could see the other direction being more feasible. Very much loving the story so far and excited to see it continue to progress. I did mean to ask since you haven’t added any tags other than Giantess, but will there be foot-related content in this story? Not that it ruins the story at all for there not to be.
Thanks for your message. I like foot stuff myself and will try to incorporate this, and in a way that will make everyone happy. :)
Date: July 06 2018 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
I deleted my previous comment and decided to add some constructive criticism. You've got a great premise going here because of the naivity of Kayla, the willingness of her mother, and Scott's reluctentness. Having the mom secretly into it as a fetish is fine, but having Kayla be in on it and immediately jump to demanding to be worshipped and called a "goddess" just takes me out of it. A daughter would likely never agree to doing this initially if she was aware it was sexual. I think the story works much better if she is oblivious to how sexual the situations are. Then you could build up to her slowly getting more into it. Alternatively, Kayla could be aware, but not dive straight into "worship me and call me Goddess" mode, at the very least.
Thanks I think this is really good advice and as I have some time today I will make some edits to reflect this concept.
Date: July 05 2018 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is probably my favorite senario with daughter shrinking her parents. I love how the step dad is very nervous about the whole ideal. I could see him stepping out of line somewhere along the line and Kayla having to show him who really is in charge. I was wondering what kind of tags are going to be in this story? Is it possible to have some panty entrapment Involved? That would be amazing. Anyway amazing start to the story and you definitely got a big fan and can't wait see what's in store.