[Report This]Date: November 02 2023 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
Have you considered continuing the story? It's really great, love the baby-size/diaper humiliation! Would love a chapter with Scott rubbing Kayla's feet, and being breastfeed by Lisa!
[Report This]Date: July 07 2022 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! Please continue it! It was just getting interesting!
Date: October 23 2018 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Did you plan to continue this story? Would love to see more!
[Report This]Date: September 13 2018 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
I have to admit I was preferring the direction your story was taking before people suggested it change. Not that it's a bad story, just liked the original scenario a lot more.
Date: September 13 2018 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent story. I'd love to see the foot rub with Kayla at full size. Is there any possibility she would grow herself beyond full size? Could also be fun and maybe even a fulfillment of her mother's wishes.
Date: September 13 2018 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love the babying. Excellent stuff. Now he's really tiny. I wonder if in the end the ladies grow back to normal and scottt lives in the dollhouse.
Date: September 13 2018 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
Fabulous chapter. Love how Kayla uses her finger to guide him. She holds them easily in her powerful hand. Really enjoyed it.
Date: September 11 2018 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Such a fantastic start to the story! Do you plan on continuing it?!
Author's Response:
Hi thanks for your comment. Directing this to you and others who have sent very nice words of encouragement since the last update. Needed to walk away from this for a while but I've been working on drafts for this story and will start posting some updates to this one starting today or tomorrow.
Date: August 02 2018 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really love this story and wanted to check to see if you had plans to continue. I really love the willingness of the mother juxtaposed to his reluctance. I also echo other comments about wishing to see more feet included. Looking forward to reading more!
[Report This]Date: July 05 2018 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is probably my favorite senario with daughter shrinking her parents. I love how the step dad is very nervous about the whole ideal. I could see him stepping out of line somewhere along the line and Kayla having to show him who really is in charge. I was wondering what kind of tags are going to be in this story? Is it possible to have some panty entrapment Involved? That would be amazing. Anyway amazing start to the story and you definitely got a big fan and can't wait see what's in store.
Date: July 05 2018 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it, super fun romp.
Date: July 05 2018 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
Interesting story.
[Report This]Date: July 04 2018 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
Damn a cliffhanger xD
Date: July 03 2018 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
keep it going, this is great :)
[Report This]Date: July 03 2018 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
Reviewing was necessary, just so I could say I'm loving what you have so far, and excitedly wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: July 02 2018 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
I need more of this , awesome work again xD
Author's Response:
Thank you friend
[Report This]Date: July 02 2018 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
Impressive start and concept. Looking very forward to where this goes.
[Report This]Date: July 01 2018 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting concept, I must admit.
Quick thing, though, because her being 60 feet tall by comparison to her shrunken mom/stepdad just sounded a little off, so I had a friend of mine math it out. If they were really 3 inches tall, like Kayla said, then ("assuming the larger of the two, then the smaller", to write my nerdy friend) 57 inches divided by 3 is 19, and 19 times 6 or 5 comes out to 114 or 95 feet tall, assuming scaling. 4 inches gets you closer, but 14 times 6 or 5 is still 84 or 70- considerably bigger. And that's rounding both parents down to the nearest foot- the bigger they are, the taller Kayla seems by comparison.
I'm a nano nut. Scaling is a big deal to me.
Still, really interesting.
Author's Response:
Hehe thank you, this is a concept that I am definitely not good at dealing with in stories like these. If you want to offer any feedback as new chapters come out (if that would interest you) I would definitely update the scale information in the story based on your feedback.