Date: July 02 2018 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
So......no one is going to bring up the the giantess is 10 years old in chapter one?????? Really???? I mean for a story that says 20 something age range; that was a goddanm shocker. Should have been a warning. Other then that issue I found the the parts i did read up to that point great....and now I am deleting my browser history.
Actually, Syra is not 10 years old. The painting that the man saw was made when she was 10. But in the first chapter. She is a full grown adult.
Date: June 29 2018 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice start. I like how you weaved it from a continuation of Jack and the Beanstalk with the giant's daughter out for revenge. I especially liked how she devoured the intruders in her home one by one as if she was on a stealth mission lol. Might I suggest proofreading it, though. I also believe the title should also say "A Giant's Revenge." Other than that, I think you have a great idea here and hope you could continue this.