[Report This]Date: April 03 2019 6:01 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
A lot to take in here.
An amazing battle between Paige and Mel, like Freddy vs Jason or Alien vs Predator before it it was a back and forth tussle that left no room for mistakes.
I was not expecting the ending but I am more curious than ever to see what happens when we next visit Mel and Adrian.
Author's Response:
Hehe, I'm glad it was unexpected! I really enjoyed having this twist in mind, and it's been in my head since very early in the story's making.
Everything comes to an end, even Endless. Chapter twenty-two will be the final chapter of my story, so we'll see the conclusion to Melanie and Adrian's tale soon. Thank you so much for your readership over these past several months~
Date: April 02 2019 11:42 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
Damn this should be interesting lol. Can’t wait to see what tortures and end Melanie decides for Paige, if she even gets the chance to. Excited to see where this all goes
Date: April 02 2019 4:24 PM Title: Chapter Twenty
Is it bad that I was rooting for Melanie in this fight? I just want Adrian to get out all right :(
I think that my order of caring about the living tinies is Adrain, Nicky, Scarlet, Chloe, then Kimberly. I could give negative fucks about Bradz, the Dean, and Paige. I used to have more sympathy for Kimberly, but she just got more bitchy as time went on. At least Scarlet has been consistent.
Author's Response:
It's a pretty messy conflict! Paige had good intentions, but Melanie loves Adrian. Someone had to win~
Aww, poor Kimberly! She's been hardened for sure. After everything she's been through, as well as being the oldest of the victims (at least til Bradz joined them), she's become quite the different person. She doesn't want anyone to get themselves hurt, and she knows how the youth can be.
Thank you for the review~