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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2018 7:42 PM Title: Chapter Eight

You had me going there, I was fully expecting Adrian and Mel's nice day filled with delicious teas and clothes shopping to end without her getting a chance at escape.

 

But yet the plot thickens in the form of Erin, bravo good sir!

 

 



Author's Response:

Adrian has her chance...! It's suspenseful, isn't it? I wanted to make sure this light-hearted chapter still gave my readers that dark chill. Thank you for this review, I really appreciate all this support~

Reviewer: Bobascher Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2018 6:44 PM Title: Chapter Eight

Another excellent chapter. I see bright things for Erin. Perhaps she will be left a bit larger for a wider variety of clothes options...

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! Unfortunately, Melanie doesn't have control over how much she shrinks her targets. The curse just shrinks a set amount, so unfortunately for Melanie, she can't entertain herself with a variety of sizes. A very fun thought though!

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