Date: June 12 2018 12:22 PM Title: 1: The Train
This is a great start so far! I love the set up you're doing. I'm trying to guess how this would go for Max and the others but with how the supervisors are acting I get the feeling something "big" is gonna happen.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!
Date: June 11 2018 5:52 AM Title: 1: The Train
the beginning of story remind me to .. 'maze runer'
i can't wait .. the next..
thanks for share
Even though I did not mean for it to be that way, I'm not surprised. I read a lot of dystopian novels, and it's one of my favourite gernes. However don't think that it will be like "The Maze Runner" because I have.... other things *wink wink* coming up. I am glad you enjoyed it, and I'm working on the next part.