Date: July 23 2018 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 5: Price to Pay
Great chapters. I’m liking the overall story quite a bit. I kind of knew that Nia wouldn’t last long but that’s the way these stories go. Looking forward to what comes next.
Author's Response:
Nia's fate and ultimate place in the story was something I contemplated a lot about and is probably one of the aspects I've changed the most going through multiple drafts, evening going as far back as the original story. Anyway thank you for the continued viewership. I'm already hard at work on the next batch of chapters.
Date: July 21 2018 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 5: Price to Pay
Even though I’m not a fan of core I gotta say, very nice character development and world building. I hope Nia survives, though judging by the ship between Jule and Grey she’ll die because of plot convenience lol.
I feel like it’s a shame that the view count is that low.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, I put a lot-probably too much-time into making the characters and the world work narrivetly so posts like these really help to see what I'm doing so far is worth the effort. I'm also happy to hear that someone not into vore is still enjoying the story.
Date: July 21 2018 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 5: Price to Pay
How did I miss these stories? This is great stuff. I love the fantasy setting, the Hunter Order, and the giantess interaction, especially the emphasis on vore. I also like Grey's rather bold attitude around the giants. I hope he's able to save Nia somehow. I look forward to seeing where this goes and learning more about the mystery surrounding Amelia.
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you! I'm a big fan of your work Pixis and it's your stories that inspired me to attempt writing-let alone post-a story like this. So this review means a lot and I hope to get more out soon in a more timely fashion.