Reviewer: Mcpoax Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2018 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 8

I gotta tell you, I'm kinda sad she didn't experience a charecter arc. I was hoping she might become loving and their could be a  relationship of sorts based upon her power and him being subservient to her.

 

Regardless I understand why you choose what you choose and I'm just glad you finished it. 

Author's Response:

Yeah, she didn't really develop much as a character. I struggled with how to end it, but cruel seemed fitting for her personality. Thank you for reading and commenting! It means a lot as a first-time writer who has no idea what they're doing.