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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2018 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Arrival

Very cool chapter.

Reviewer: Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 26 2018 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Arrival

This is only the second time in my whole life I use this account... and the first one was when I contacted my all-time favourite GTS writer to offer him a free art request (here you can see my stuff on Twitter: https://twitter.com/LabbaArt); and guess what? I'm using it again now to tell you that this story is beautiful, not to mention my favourite ongoing one involving shrinking!

Especially because we seem to be into the same stuff: micro, unaware, voluntary shrinking and life-threatening situations!~ Keep up the good work!

Also... if I ever have the time to draw a cover for your story, will you give me your permission to do so?



Author's Response:

Cool, thanks for the compliments! Love your art too, keep up the good work. If you drew a cover, I'd be flattered.

Reviewer: smuttymcsmutpants Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2018 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Arrival

I adore the idea of people shrinking down and travelling by mail, and 1/8th of an inch is such a fun size for this scenario! I really like the tension built in the latest chapter, with the threat of sisterly revenge. The unaware aspect so far is great, and I hope you explore it a bit more befor they get discovered. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take the story from here. I'd love to see maybe some underarm or cleavage torture for our tiny protagonists, whether by accident or Grace indulging her cruel desires.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2018 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Arrival

Good stuff

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