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Reviewer: WootJimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 27 2018 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Teased by Kristin

An old favorite. I cant get enough of all the shoe descriptions and use. Also +1000 Points for the use of etnies shoes, a personal favorite of mine.



Author's Response: In real life, I had the opportunity to sniff both Kayla’s and Phoebe’s Etnies. Kayla’s were in lost and found so I was able to take my time and enjoy that. Phoebe, who is not at all a submissive in person, actually made me smell hers. I was only able to take a single whiff. It was very difficult to conceal my arousal before her. Good memories. Skater shoes are some of my favorites.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2018 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Teased by Kristin

Cosmetic changes - good.

In case anyone else is interested in comparisons, what I did was save as plain text, adjust a few silly things (quotes!) and use the dwdiff program - worksforme(tm), but easier solutions are welcome.

 

Btw, to quote Mrs Lathrop, "And I hear that she might have to serve a interlude class in Mrs. Garcia’s shoes" - unless you come up with some new brilliant idea you're doooooomed to write that. Maybe publish it for Christmas? :D



Author's Response: Yeh...that will be quite the challenge considering I have a Fall Social to write about :)

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2018 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Teased by Kristin

It's GREAT to see this story back!!! Sorry for the html, someone requested a repost and I posted it exactly as it was, html and all... If you're comfortable with unix tools (or any programming language) you should be able to clean it up pretty quickly (as in: minutes at most), otherwise libreoffice/word/whatever should allow you to import the html directly.

 

If it takes you too long, tell me a destination format you're comfortable with and I'll clean up the html myself.

PS: do you still have all of your stories? (I *think* I do, just in case)

PPS: differences? Now I'm curious, but real life is stupid and so it will take me a while to read - congrats in advance anyway :)

 

 



Author's Response: No worries; converted it to pdf off pastebin seemed to take care of most of the issues. Unicode couldn’t figure out quotations and hyphens/dashes.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2018 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Teased by Kristin

A glorious day!

 

The other story you wrote is there as well if you'd like a link. Also I'd love to read more about Alex and her sister if you are writing anything these days.



Author's Response:

Hi Adam X,

 

Yes, I have PUF2 downloaded and will work through the removal of the leftover code in there and then repost.  I appreciate the feedback.  I hadn't considered a story involving Alex & Lizzie, but I'll put some time to it.  Is there any particular scene/scenario you'd like to see between them?

Reviewer: jx59syun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2018 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Teased by Kristin

One of my all-time favorites, thanks for reposting the updated version of this. I had the old one downloaded myself, didn't realize it was missing here 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  There's not a whole lot of difference between this and the original.  It had been quite some time since I had read through this, and I had forgotten the treatment I had given the mother/daughter interaction at the end.  I was actually pretty happy with how it played out, granted, I did fast-forward the time to the beginning of the week quickly, b/c that's where the story needed to get to.

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