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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2019 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Kept in Kristine's Cleats

Sheldy conceedes that she's pathetic? I guess that's true. She enjoys putting herself in harm's way!

I suppose on some level I must enjoy seeing certain humans being tortured. I have written about gore and torture in somewhat graphic detail before, when the scene permitted. Though you'd never catch me dominating anyone, for three reasons:

1. I've always hated "authority" figures and I think it'd make me hypocrite.

2. I'm too nice to the people I meet.

3. If it was somebody I truly cared about I'd hate the thought of harming them.

Overall I enjoyed this chapter. It was nice see other characters – i.e. be outside Sara’s house. Ever since reading Crushing Cameron and the party I've been curious to explore more of those other party attendees.

I am thankful for writing in Kristine here (I assume the same one from your other story). Though all of the party goers were all quite enjoyable to read about. I did, of course, get the impression that you had a certain fondness for Samantha from our conversations. I hope we get to see more of Kristine in the future and that will help keep things fresh as she would have her own way of doing things. Not that Sara isn’t a well thought out character.

6.4ft seems a bit too tall for me but whatever. Sorry for not reviewing sooner. I got caught up with things. I'm seriously thinking I need to 'tie up any loose ends' and start writing again but I still don’t know if I want to. There’s some excellent inspiration on this website and I’ve recently helping out another author with designs for their characters.



Author's Response: Future chapters will hopefully have some added flavor of additional gts-mistresses. I have a whole cast sheet written up for subs and dommes. We’ll have to see where the story flows after Shelby’s weekend.

Reviewer: Tinyman345 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2019 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Kept in Kristine's Cleats

I love this story so much, it's excellent! I've always had a thing for athletic giantesses, so reading about a bunch of cruel softball players torturing tiny people in their smelly cleats and with their big, sweaty, smelly feet is so neat!

It would be so awesome to see the team have a get together after their games and just go to town on their subs. A bunch of giants and giantesses just torturing the hell out of a bunch of tinies with their post softball feet laughing and enjoying themselves as they celebrate crushing their opponents while their subs are crushed, literally.

I can't wait to see what happens next and keep up the fantastic writing!

Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying the twisted sadism that is in my mind! :)

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2019 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Kept in Kristine's Cleats

Excellent stuff!

 

I'm been hoping to see this section for bit now.

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