Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2018 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Sandal Stomped Into Submission

Yes, I am referring to her crushing Shelby beneath her sandal and not really giving her an option to tap-out. That just seems like a clear breach of trust and, well, douchy. Isn't it really bad if "safe words" aren't adhered to? If Sara is not paying attention to the use of safe words then what’s the point of having them in the first place? Surely she should be chastised by her peers as the use of safe words is surely very important.

Shelby is only paying for what she feels comfortable doing and she should be very angry that Sara has gone beyond what is she comfortable doing. That could be a plot point to explore, and is why I raised it. She might even go so far as to be scared away from her own fetish, as opposed to merely finding somebody new to be abusive with her.

Not sure what's funny about my username but I'm sure it has made other people chuckle. Glad you like Alexsis Faye! I was searching for some inspiration for new character designs one day and I stumbled upon her and was instantly drawn to her. Designing characters in Daz3D is one things; putting them in an actual story is another entirely. I would obviously be honoured to have you write for me (in exchange for something, not for free) but you've mentioned being busy and I actually now look forward to the future direction of this story (especially given your recent review responses). This story is fascinating, so in spite of any gripes and grumbles I have mentioned, I find it interesting and also amusing. Thus, it's an entertaining enough read for me. I wonder what psychologists would think of Sara.

Author's Response: I’d be curious to know what psychologists think of the person whose mind created this world :) And your handle is just unique. Usually they’re something the person might identify with in some form or another, I’m not sure how else to describe the humor I find in it, per se.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2018 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Sandal Stomped Into Submission

I’m left wondering what the end game for this story is. Do you intend to keep on writing until you get bored of it? At the moment it looks as though it could be one of those stories that can go on indefinitely because I remained to be convinced that there can be a concluding chapter as there is always room to write more (I could be wrong)..

Maybe you could have a Doctor-Who-esque kind of set up, in that when one Doctor dies another takes their place. Just replace Doctor with “Mistress” in this case (but they don’t have to die). That way you have more avenues to explore and readers get more of an insight into this universe and it means things can be “freshened up” every once in a while. As in Doctor Who – where previous (seemingly “killed off”) Doctors do make occasional appearances in future episodes – you could have previous characters appear in future instalments in a future expanded series.

Given what has just transpired in chapter eight I have an inclining that Shelby may look for a new “mistress”. I really feel bad for her having to go through all that, but then she literally asked for it when she paid her, so I can’t feel too awful for her. I am sure Shelby knew what she was getting herself into. This time I was actually annoyed – angry even – at Sara as opposed to one of her pathetic clientele.

Then I saw this in your response to a reviewer:

“I just have to get the story ready to have the additional content added.”

I’m left wondering which of the reviewers ideas where taken into consideration. I left a comment suggesting a rivalry between “mistresses” and Shelby having had enough of Sara – given how Sara is potentially doing things Shelby doesn’t want – would be an excellent set up for her leaving Sara and Sara becoming distraught. Chapter eight has left me wanting to see Sara be abused for a change. It would be glorious to read about her having a ‘taste of her own medicine’ so to speak. Having done that, then it might be a good a time as any to ease in a new “mistress”.

If it were up to me, I’ve taken a recently liking to (adult) model Alexsis Faye. I probably wouldn’t copy her exactly; maybe I’d change the hair. I’d mainly use a character with her powerful looking body. She’s plump – maybe some might say overweight – and yet she appears to excellent take care of her body. So despite some playing her in the so-called “BBW2 category her body remains firm and unblemished.

http://www.boobpedia.com/boobs/Alexsis_Faye

 

https://i.pinimg.com/originals/64/25/75/6425758dc0c198c288e30e72d38ecbca.jpg

 

https://www.primecurves.com/alexsis-faye-v-is-for-voluptuous/4.jpg

I think my next Daz3D project will be to recreate Alexsis Faye as best I can. I like these sorts of challenges. I’d got a riding crop prop I can use so that will help!

In fact, I may just do that one day. I’ve had some more ideas of my own brewing. But then in my own story the “mistresses” would really be extraterrestrials torturing humans because they want to gain important information from them (e.g. intelligence), like of like how their do at the Guantanamo Bay facility.

Author's Response:

Hey Stubbornstain-

I've always found your handle amusing.  Anyway, the "Doctor Who" analogy is interesting.  I don't necessarily have an end-game, per se, but I've got 7 chapters of a commission that explore this realm that I haven't uploaded yet.  Like Shelby, it covers a weekend of intense gts domination.  I've introduced a few elements that are similar to what you suggesting.  I am slightly amused that you were angered by Mistress Sara's actions in this chapter, assuming you're referring to her crushing Shelby beneath her sandal and not really giving her an option to tap-out.  Yeh, I was rather fond of that moment, too :)

I need to finish Shelby's personal hell before I upload the commissioned weekend for another client of the Mistress, just so there's some form of continuity there.  

I like the idea of having the tables turned on Mistress Sara, and I think there's some opportunity there.  In the commission yet to be published, I do make mention of her having to spend some time in the cleat of one of her softball teammates as the result of a lost bet.  I think that will be a good write.  I also introduce the person who helps her see this as a lifestyle, and its not her perverted husband, either.

Regarding Shelby seeking out another mistress, well, let's just say that the commission I'm currently writing will create potentially unique revenge vector, should I feel that needs to happen...and I admit, I sorta do :)

 

Alexsis Faye is quite pretty.  She looks tall along with her size, and I LOVE tall women!