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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2019 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 7: Some Kind of Irony

Holy hell, that was so fucking hot! I was really hoping that Gloria would find him at the end tho ;) haha

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2018 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 7: Some Kind of Irony

Once again, loving these chapters! Obviously I can't replicate a long review like last time, but I genuinely could say that chapter 7 was clearly my favorite!

I think you already figured out what I like. Gloria and her private area. Love this introduction to her lustful side. She must really miss her husband. Did she miss him or just the pleasure? I bet John would fill that void in her life easily.

I kinda liked the tease that Emma said in chapter 6. She mentioned that if Kate and her keep fighting over John, then Gloria gets to keep John. I'm all for that idea. If I was in John's position, I'm sticking with Gloria. And yes, Emma, it's because she has a woman's body.

So Gloria does indeed have a secret drawer. I bet she has been stocking on dildos and other gadgets ever since she lost her husband. Part of me was really hoping that Gloria would find John there, but I know you won't reveal him to her yet. I'm anxious for that moment. Then again, if I was John, why would I hide in the dildo? Why not just let Gloria find him? She doesn't know of Kate's powers so it's not like she will punish Kate. In fact, I think Gloria would have kept John to herself and make a lie to the girls....oh wait. Emma put him in the drawer. Never mind. Ha.

Good thing Gloria is off this weekend. (Funny becuase it's the weekend in real life too.) I can't wait for future stuff with Gloria and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for responding again, I really appreciate the continued interest in the story! You're touching on a lot of points that will definitely come up in the future, I don't know how yet, but they will lol. I'm sure the dynamic between John and Gloria will get wilder too so I'm happy you enjoy it.

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