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Reviewer: Jessica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2018 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Going Way Off Course

Hey there, I almost never log in / review any more but I simply had to say something for this story. I absolutely adore this, from the characters, to the execution, to the general atmosphere of degrading a hero into slavery. This is one of my favorite stories on the site now and I'll definitely be looking forward to hearing more from you!

To balance it out a bit, I do feel like the formatting makes it a little hard to digest and could greatly help out the story if just spaced a bit better. If you'd like any more feedback from me please feel free to reach out directly. Thanks again!

-Jess



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words. I've kind of hit an inspiration drought, so I've been kicking around other ideas. I actually tried to contact you through this site to possible chat ideas, though I'm not sure if it actually worked. lol.

Reviewer: Lucia1312 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 30 2018 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Going Way Off Course

Seems good, when are you going to update next chaper?

Reviewer: Tinywulf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2018 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Going Way Off Course

Damn, and wow, and uhh...<blush> what a surprise

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2018 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Going Way Off Course

Great stuff!!!

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