Date: May 05 2018 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Going Way Off Course
Hey there, I almost never log in / review any more but I simply had to say something for this story. I absolutely adore this, from the characters, to the execution, to the general atmosphere of degrading a hero into slavery. This is one of my favorite stories on the site now and I'll definitely be looking forward to hearing more from you!
To balance it out a bit, I do feel like the formatting makes it a little hard to digest and could greatly help out the story if just spaced a bit better. If you'd like any more feedback from me please feel free to reach out directly. Thanks again!
Thank you for the kind words. I've kind of hit an inspiration drought, so I've been kicking around other ideas. I actually tried to contact you through this site to possible chat ideas, though I'm not sure if it actually worked. lol.