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Reviewer: bailey69 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2017 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 6

I thought it was boring I mean just rubbing feet not much of a story and not a lot to it could have been sexier it would have made it better try again don't give up.

Reviewer: Footslave513 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2013 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 6

Please continue great story can't wait for the rest!

Reviewer: Footslave513 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2013 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

Please continue great story can't wait for the rest!

Reviewer: zephilia Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 6

Love the cruelty of the female members of the family.

Reviewer: flospring Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 6

very good story!and so good idea!

Reviewer: shabtai Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2007 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Man i wished there was more. I mean more of him even smaller and how is life was then. Maybe even something were the mom likes him that small that he stays that small forever and then ended off. But thats my thoughts anyway. Keep writing...

Reviewer: Jay Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2007 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 1

I'm enjoying this story and hope that his mother eventually slowly and cruely crushes him beneath her giant foot. If so, please draw out his agony.

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2007 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 6

Well i was hopeing for a happey ending where his mom makes him big and he has a happy life. I don't meen this in a bad way but a mom doing crule things to her son no mom should be like that. I know she doesn't like men but to shrink her son and do mean things to him. It's not my place to tell you what to wright or how to do your stories. It's just my opion i guess. I like the story over all but it's just the mom and son thing i don't like. Any way am not trying to be mean to you. Any way a very good story and you did a good job on it and i would like to see how this will all end. Good Job

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 28 2007 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 4

I can't help but feel sorry for him his own mom would treat her own son this crule. But i guess i wont expect any thing lest from a man hater like his mom. Any way good job hope to read more soon. One more quick question can his mom change people and things back to there normal size??

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2007 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

A good story sofar. One quick question -  was Eric born small or did his mom shrink him after he was born?

Author's Response: thanks, and no at age 5 he was shrunk, sorry I didnt make that clear

Reviewer: shane_bolt Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2007 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a pretty good story so far. I can't wait to see what you do with it. I will keep checking back for updates.

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