[Report This]Date: June 11 2018 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 6: To Err is Human
Was re-readning this story again and see that it is now listed as completed. Guess that sums up if her survived or not some how. Looking forward to your next entrey in this series
Date: May 25 2018 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 6: To Err is Human
Awesome story, but like other readers, the ending seems very out of place. Was on pace to maybe go down as my favorite story on this site. Would have liked to see the action extend out a bit more, or at least Jacob not go out via vore.
Have you considered an alternative ending (or endings) by any chance? I was thinking something like this: last chapter happens as planned and Sara tricks Jacob into shrinking. She shares how she is going to kill him, but before she steps on him, she decides that he'd enjoy it too much and ends up giving him to Justine to torture. Justine ends up torturing him a bit with her feet as revenge, and comes up with a plan to get rid of him. Next time she's at Lauren's house, she leaves him there (stuck in one of her shoes or something), to be found by Lauren. Lauren is freaked out when she finds him, and now even more grossed out plus mad at what he did to Sara, decides to crush him underfoot.
Great story nonetheless. Look forward for more similar stories.
Date: May 21 2018 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 6: To Err is Human
I don't want this to seem like a negative review, because it's not meant to be, but I didn't really enjoy this latest chapter, Chapter 6. It wasn't the content or subject matter, it was more of the speed at which it was presented. It felt like it didn't really fit with the way the rest of the story has been written up to this point, and a bit rushed.
I'm almost always opposed to this, but in this case I'm actually hoping the next chapter begins with Jacob waking up and realizing the events of the last chapter were a dream, haha
But whatever happens, it's your story, and you've got to write it however you feel is right. I'll still be along for the ride, whevever it goes, and even if I don't like how things end, I'll still be appreciative for the chapters that I did greatly enjoy!
[Report This]Date: May 21 2018 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 6: To Err is Human
Jacob is such a dumbass. He keeps pissing everybody off, I think he deserves everything that got to him.
Also, thanks for writing! I still enjoyed the story!
[Report This]Date: May 20 2018 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 6: To Err is Human
Hopefully this isn't the end, I'm still enjoying this story. No idea how Jacob is gonna survive though.