Date: April 19 2018 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Night Begins
I like the story so far please keep writing i love incest when reding storys like these
Author's Response: I wish things like this would happen to me IRL haha. If only our fantasies could come true sometime in the future!
Date: April 19 2018 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Emily’s Friends
I'm not sure what to think of this story since it's like 3 stories in one. Also, I was kinda hoping for a mother scene, but not his mother.
Maybe Emily's friends mother or someone like that. Maybe Meridith or soemone gets jealous and keeps him and her mother finds him.
There's also a few teachers showing up and I wonder if a teacher might stumble upon him one chapter. Perhaps, Sarah has a "show and tell" and the teacher takes him as her prize.
While the sisters aren't that bad, it does feel weird when even the main character says "if she was 17, then this would be heaven" or something like that. I mean, why not have an actual woman with womanly features to satisfy him?
I like the choice system of your chapters and it lets us choose which ones I like. I haven't found one that I liked a lot yet, but the ideas are pretty good enough that if you get the right giantess, I will enjoy it a lot more.
Afterall, this is your first story and it's up to you to decide what you want to write.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I may use one or two of your ideas, but Emily will probably have the longest story. And there will more likely than not be a mother scene somewhere in here!
Date: April 17 2018 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Stephanie
Great work on the chapters. Definitely would like to see where it goes with Stephanie. Also from what I got, it seems the story is going to revolve around the sisters, but I am curious to know if Caleb will interact with the mother at all. Would be cool to see. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I may do this as a bonus at the end!