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Reviewer: baaronz12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2018 6:58 PM Title: My Queen Arrives

A super sexy story that puts the power of size into perspective. Your way of describing their adventures and their lust is immaculate!

Keep up the fantastic work!

The inclusion of woman who finds another bottle of the formula would be interesting or the perspective of the people below witnessing Loren's acension into Goddesshood.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

You might see some perspective stuff in a coming chapter so keep an eye out for it!

Reviewer: Parzival14 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10 2018 6:43 PM Title: My Queen Arrives

Hello, just read ch 5 and im loving this story so far.
Quick question this chapter(chapter 5) takes place during ch 3 right?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Yes, chapter 5 takes place during chapter 3.

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