Date: April 26 2018 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 9: A Roll in the Hay
Nice chapter. I wonder if Morgan is going to end up in Allie's Womb. Hope so, I really enjoy unbirth stories. It might even be one possible cure, though only if you don't mind becoming a baby again.
Date: April 21 2018 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 7: Her Cups Runneth Over, Part 2
Hmph! If this were a gangster movie, and she was a Mafia "princess," her alias would be "Allie Two Minds."
Everyone's got that voice that tells them to do naughty things. Allie just has complete power over two people to act on those thoughts.
Date: April 19 2018 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: Kris and Morgan
Seriously, though: it sounds like Allie and John have developed there own little systems. Him, for virtually tying with her for appearing in the same part of the house way away from the bedroom. And her, for knowing when he's spying on her without her supposedly knowing that he's there.
Such familiarity can lead to monotony (rather than contempt). So, maybe Morgan can bring some refreshing spontaneity to this new dynamic.
Morgan is definitely disturbing some dynamic between Allie and John. But we'll all have to see how that plays out, won't we?
Date: April 19 2018 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 5: Watching and Waiting
Next up? Chapter 6.
"Her Cups Runneth Over...With Lust."
Well, I'm probably going to end up naming the chapter Her Cups Runneth Over, now. Way better than what I was going to end up putting.