[Report This]Date: June 14 2020 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting descriptions, paragraphs are a good length, lingers on exposition a little much for this type of story, but really good overall. Please keep writing!
Date: May 01 2018 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm really enjoying this so far. Hope that this continues!
Date: April 09 2018 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow... this was an amazing chapter!! The way you describe the whole scene and how Danny was just unsure how to react while Mandy took over was just awesome. Definitely a fan now and hopefully there will be another chapter!
Author's Response:
Your wish is my command. :)
Date: April 08 2018 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent to see you back here! And my thanks to your client for this sticky, constricting freebie. I've been waiting for this almost as long as Maddy has.
Author's Response:
Oh, the person who commissioned this originally wanted a short story involving the cast of Power. It's unfortunately scorched earth for me at this point, but I thought you'd appreciate knowing you're not alone in the fan club.