Date: January 06 2019 2:04 PM Title: The Hidden Danger
Chapter 18 : My goddess
Glad you're comeback !
This chapter is so great i appreciate how poor Adam is tortured by anaware girl's sneakers and boots in the previous chapters but under Chloe sneaker it's different , keep going on this story i can't wait for a discover under her shoe. (Clair's idea next chapter)
Perhaps Chloe will be nice after discovering Adam or she will be mean. Besides , maybe Adam will be tortured by Clair's and Erin's shoes because seemingly , both of them aren't nice with bugs at their feet. ^^
Good work !
Date: December 18 2018 11:01 AM Title: The Hidden Danger
Really great story, one of my all is ime favourites.
My only criticism is to point out that you breathe using your "lungs", you keep speaking it as "lounges" across many stories and chapters.
Lounges is the plural of lounge, as in living room.
Author's Response:
I am awful with that type of thing. Thank you for pointing it out. I'll try to fix it going forward.
[Report This]Date: October 09 2018 9:46 AM Title: The Hidden Danger
Loving Amy and her filthy shoe soles. I'd love to see more of that stuff. Really drives home his insignificance.
Date: July 23 2018 3:43 AM Title: The Hidden Danger
Hey, by any chance, do you still take paid commitions?
Author's Response:
Hey ap,
Send me an email with what you were thinking. Always willing to listen to an idea or two.
Date: May 14 2018 12:41 AM Title: The Hidden Danger
Great beginning.
Author's Response:
Great review
Date: April 09 2018 11:55 PM Title: The Hidden Danger
nice one, hope you keep the story unaware!! :D
Author's Response:
For the most part it should be
[Report This]Date: April 09 2018 2:15 PM Title: The Hidden Danger
Welcome back!! I always look forward to your stories and this one seems to be like your other ones. Amazing!
Author's Response:
Thanks. Its good to be back :)
[Report This]Date: April 08 2018 7:13 PM Title: The Hidden Danger
Be careful what you wish for, Adam. You might get it!
Author's Response:
Good advise for the entire gts community
Date: April 08 2018 1:40 PM Title: The Hidden Danger
Definately had some daydreams aboutHR girls. Usually when they wore stockings.
Author's Response:
Don't we all?
Date: April 08 2018 1:09 PM Title: The Hidden Danger
Glad to see you back! Looking forward to more of this story!
Author's Response:
Thank
Date: April 08 2018 4:22 AM Title: The Hidden Danger
Mrs. Brooks sounds wonderful. I would definitely answer her with Yes Ma'am.
Author's Response:
You and everyone else who met her
Date: April 08 2018 12:38 AM Title: The Hidden Danger
I always love your stories. I doubt I'll be disappointed.
Author's Response:
Get ready for a surprise then!
Just kidding. I think it'll turn out fun