Date: April 22 2018 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
Mia is so cute, I hope we hear more from her.
Also will they be mouthplay in this story?
Keep it up, it's one of the best stories I read in a long while!
And since you requested it, I'll try to work in some mouth play too.
Date: April 13 2018 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
When she says: "My name's Sophie, but you probably figured that one out,"
I thought to myself: I don't know how he could have figured it out. Her names wasn't spoken previously to that. Nobody appears to introduce her before she introduces herself and her name just apears out of the blue in the story. Although because there's only two of them in the room it's easy to work out.
Also, I love the opening. I know this will be cute. I need to read on. I love it so far.