Reviews For A Jealous Friend
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Reviewer: BenX21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2018 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Why did she shrink Steve, not this bitch Kellie? Anyway i like it. Publish chapters more often.



Author's Response: Beth gets more enjoyment out of stealing Steve and using him as her very own fuck toy right under Kellieís nose then she would punishing Kellie herself, Beth wanted Steve and Kellie stole him from her and now sheís taken back what she deserved. And Iím posting a couple of chapters once a week so I can keep in front with my writing, I donít get a great deal of time to write and if I post more often then youíll be waiting even longer for more chapters and this way it just keeps you in suspense, but Iím glad you like it so far being my first ever story, but I will warn you, it gets very nasty in some chapters, I just hope it still appeals to you all, Iím just writing fantasies that Iíd like to happen to myself, but Thanks for reading and Thanks for your feedback.

Reviewer: 3l33thax0r Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 26 2018 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

Always good to see a new author post on this site, welcome! :D

Not many people do a story with a BBW giantess, but you’ve done pretty well with Beth so far. The only thing I’d suggest is to work on breaking up your paragraphs more, such as when a different person speaks. It’ll make reading it easier.

Hoping to see Beth move Steve a little further back in the future. ;) please keep up the good work!



Author's Response: Gíday, Thanks for the feedback, iíve never written a story before, so iím Just winging it, itís taken me a while to post it because I wasnít sure if anyone would like it, I like BBW Giantess stories but they are hard to come by, I put up a challenge a while ago but no one accepted it, so I thought iíd write my own, I have a lot of ideaís that I will hopefully get around to writing, but at the moment Iím just working on this one, iím actually up to chapter 54 and iíll just post a couple of chapters every week, Iím just finding it hard to end. Once again thank you your feedback is greatly appreciated.

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