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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2023 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 21

Shame Teg couldn't get more time with her little bro over the course of the story.

As for the ending I definitely have an idea who it was attacking him but I'll leave that up to you with the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I enjoyed writing her character, only because at the same time I didn't want the same stereotypical little sister character that pops up in so many of these stories. Just someone who is a percieved threat, but is generally disinterested in being an antagonist because it would be too easy and because someone bigger than her constantly keeps her in check. 

Reviewer: 99rednexela Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 29 2023 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 21

Really interesting story. I loved the initial premise of it but I’ve also loved all the developments and characters you’ve introduced. I’m looking forward to more! 

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