Date: November 05 2018 8:52 AM Title: Epilogue
I enjoyed the endings very much. All of them came to logical and exciting conclusions. Loved Mary Ellen corralling them and dropping them into her purse. Loved Ellen putting them to work and taking control of the situation and having her own pleasure.
I also greatly enjoyed Karen description of capturing tank. He really got his punishment as each lady took turns with the tiny dildo. That was fabulous.
Loved the dollhouse. Also loved Nate Dog escaping. He's too smart to stick around. It was nice of johnny and Sarah to occasionally leave him some food. I can imagine Sarah walking over and leaving the little bag of food.
This has been one of my favorite stories by anyone, anywhere. I really enjoyed reading your thoughts and the realism that's in your writing.
Thanks,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Which one of my unfinished stories would you like to see continue next Diesel?
Thanks as always!
Date: November 02 2018 7:31 PM Title: Epilogue
Really enjoyed this story especially the mall chapters showing the size differences. Mary was a nice change of pace compared to the usual mean giantess, gotta love giant milfs.
Glad Sarah was able to make a better life for John and the he got a good ending while the antagonists got what they deserved unlike other stories.
“ How did that lady know your name?”, I had a good chuckle.
Thanks for your assessment Grandmaster B... I figured that there needed to be balance rather than a one sided mean evil get the life smashed out of you that others do or that I am guilty of myself sometimes. After all, it's not all evil out there. John deserved a break too. He'd really been put through the ringer and we have to consider how we would behave if bad things happened to us again and again and again.. Many would break, some would kill themselves, and others might just shut down completely... So there had to be some light for our protagonist somewhere I figured. Thanks a lot for the review Grandmaster B. :)
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: November 02 2018 5:28 PM Title: Epilogue
I’m honestly a little disappointed about this chapter. I thought the focus was going to be about Mary Ellen. Instead, it featured 3 mini chapters of stuff that I honestly wasn’t too interested in at the moment.
Sure the parts with John and Tank are great, but I was expecting more Mary Ellen. The Mary Ellen part was way too brief in my opinion. She was excellent in it, and I love the role you gave her. I just wanted more of her and I was expecting a chapter full of her.
Also, the end of the story? Really? I thought the next phase was about to begin with Mary Ellen. I was getting tired of the mall scenes, but this isn’t what I meant.
A sequel would be amazing for this. You could include multiple tinies in multiple situations just like this.
I probably will give a more relaxed review later on, but on my initial reaction, I was expecting a Mary Ellen chapter that might start something new with all these tinies.
Don’t get me wrong, I do love your work Crocodile, I just think the hype I had for this was just way too high.
I hope you write again, and I can’t wait for your next story!
Author's Response:
The only hype that you have Tom is the hype that you gave yourself.. I informed you that I had realized that there was only a very small cadre of reviewers which told me that, yes, many people were reading this, but that it was not making enough of an impression on them to say so. Therefore, one must listen to the direction that the wind blows sometimes...
You are free to make any spin offs that you like. I'd be thrilled to read them. But I can not satisfy everyone all of the time (as in your case) and I came to a conclusion that I wasn't even satifying the bulk of the readers to begin with.. Therefore it was time to bring this story to a close. Thank you for being one of the few who took the effort to make comments and helped to make it last as long as it did... I just wish there were more of you but alas, there was not. See you around when I get the will to write again I hope.