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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2018 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 7

By the way when I think of Dr. Johnson, I think of the gray haired lady scientist in the isw. When she leans in a places her face in front of the cage, it's chilling.

Author's Response:

Yes, that was a very chilling scene...  How she could dominate just be leering and changing the tone of  her voice with threats that the lady knew she could back up.

I'm with you on that. ;)

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 24 2018 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it! Perhaps some of that 6-inch ravishing with sister-in-law Karen is in the works? Either way, I’m hooked and can’t wait to read what’s in store!

Author's Response:

There's more in store.  I need to cover his wife for one thing, he he. . I'm just very busy with some mundane life stuff right now...  Thanks a lot for your positive words and continual support Johnsmith. :)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2018 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 7

What a thrilling chapter. Right away the reader finds out a little about life in the carrying case. After the Nurse unlatches his door he unbuckled. Nice to know that his safety is thought of when he is in the carrying cage. Knowing, I guess from experience to come out of the cage when called upon or else risk her Gigantic Hand entering the cage to remove him.
Loved the description of the cold metal table and the colossal omnipotent ladies.
Great choices in having the younger Asian lady and the more experienced grayish doctor. I can clearly see these type of doctors in this situation. Nurse Hikiro moves him from station to station talking to him like he was a baby. The humiliation of disrobing in front of her and then her eventually crumbling it in her hand to dispose of it in her pocket really makes you feel small. You could never retrieve it until she decides that you can have it.
The walk to the weigh in and the head idea for measuring were great.
Loved her All Powerful Fingers holding him in place as she probed him. I will definitely read this chapter more than once.
Once he gets strapped in I love how her Gigantic Face smiles when he struggles to try and get free. I am sure it amuses her as she has seen many other tiny men trying to escape. Dr. Johnson is fantastic as he screams and cusses. She calmly reminds him of the fine print. I think she enjoys her control over tiny men on a daily basis.
Loved how Dr.Johnson explains things to him and grins before he is grabbed and dropped back in his cage. Certainly a punishment for his rude behavior. Now he gets to go back to his caregiver. Great wording. As I said, I will read this numerous times. It was a treat. Will he be examined by Dr. Johnson again in the future. I doubt She will as gentle the next time she see's him.

Author's Response:

Hold on, I'm going to go make a cup of coffee so that I can read your review Diesel as I know that it's going to be very indepth! Ha, ha.!   But I look forward to them so I'll be right back! ;)

Ok, reading now....

Ah, yes well I'm very happy that you noticed the little subtle details once again..  I've actually had some people say that I talk about things that don't have a bearing on the matter but I disagree with them.. Everything counts I theorize and am glad that this little theory of mine is validated by your recognition Diesel. :)

I tried to be somewhat generic with their faces giving the reader the bare bones minimum so that they could feel in the blanks within the framework that I made for them..  In other words I wanted the ready to put their own lady from someone that they know in their real lives on the face bases that they had before them..   I don't really like it when the author does all of the work and says something like "She was a Jenneifer Aniston look alike."   That robs the reader of their own imaginations which I think is unfair.. I'll only break this rule when I have a very powerful character to submit though.

I think you might see those two again further down the road as I know that you enjoy these types of scenes as much as I do going off of past experiences. :)

And yes, she does geta sadistic thrill from dominating and inflicting pain or pleasure... The nurse is a complimentary sister in arms too!

Thanks again for a great thought provoking review Diesel!!!  You might want to become a professional for this community on the matter. ;)

Reviewer: Kane001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 16 2018 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 7

Man I don't know what was worst for John, the anal probe, the rape, or the fact he'll probably never be able to leave. It's like a snowball effect, the situation just got worst and worst and worst. 

Maybe he'll get a big poster for the wall of his cell that they won't look behind for a while. Looking forward to the next installment.



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot Kane...  It's the old adage, from bad to worse that comes to mind.    And yes, he was really put through the ringer this time...  Hence he was pretty broke down when he was carried back to his minder at the end.

He, he. thanks a lot for the review and comments Kane. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2018 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 7

Back to back medical chapters? I'm so used to the random order that I wasn't expecting another doctor to be in this chapter.

So this is the yearly appointment which John has to take. Just so they can check up on him, right? They are monitoring his size and physical conditions to see if anything has changed. I love how they use every...kind of test. Seemed like it.

My favorite scene was obviously when John was tied up with those restraints and then the young nurse shoved her nipple into his mouth to help stimulate his erection. I'm a big fan of bondage, so this was super sexy. I'm not exactly a boob/nipple fan, but I'm sure John is. If that was me, that nipple wouldn't have helped my erection much. A face full of pussy on the other hand will definately get me going. Imagine a giantess pussy ready to swallow you up and you can let escape with all those restraints on you.

Random side note: I love how you reply to reviews quickly. Makes me feel that my review was important enough to be read, and also you give me time to respond to your replies if necessary.

Anyway, I loved this chapter and I can't wait for that neighborhood soccer mom, Mary from chapter 5 to show up again. I bet John's first appearance to her has got Mary thinking of ways to get herself more aquianted. I'm already daydreaming!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I understand what you're saying about a face full of love canal... But you gotta throw the breast guys/gals a bone too...  And that's the fundamental challenge that I face with every chapter.. How to give everyone something..   I've realized that you really can't do that and have it make sense so you have to sprinkle the goodies along the course of the whole story.  It's just keeping people interested long enough to hold out for their particular likes that becomes the real challenge...   Stories can be hard that way...  But if you can keep them that interested to hold out then you've beat the boredom odds.

I had not planned on doing back to back medical chapters to be quite honest.. This turned out to be a accident actually.. But yeah, I would expect him to have all kinds of specialists trying to dissect him in various ways if he were indeed cooperating with a goverment research program..

Actually this was his weekly appointment though Tom.. Not his yearly..  You can go back and double check but I do believe I stressed that. he  he.

I'm glad that you liked this chapter.  I might try to change things up some in a couple of chapters from now.  So be ready, he, he.

 

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