Date: April 08 2018 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hmm. Haven't read this story in a while. Just read chapters 3-6.
The mother in law chapter was nice. She established her role as being dominant and also convinced John to keep their new relationships status as a secret.
Then the sister in law chapter was just an improved version of her mother. She got an amazing ass scene and I loved how she was grinding on John on that couch. While the mother used more seductive words to control John, his sister in law was more physical. I like that, especially a mix of both words and actions so this was nice.
The escape chapter was by far my favorite chapter. Even though it didn't have any sexual situations with the family, I am intrigued by the mother of those 2 girls. Her initial reaction was of shock and soon after she composed herself, began fondling him, I assume to make sure he is real and to convince herself of that fact. As she dropped him off, I love how attached she was to John and her reluctance to let him go while also being careful of making sure he is returned safely. I would love to see this mother again. I think her name was Mary, what a nice name. I forgot most of the other giantess names but not Mary. She is special to me. I hope next time, she decides to have some fun if she sees little John again. She gives me this vibe of a sexy wife who misses her husband and would love to have John as a someone or perhaps soemthing to fill that void in her life. You said she was a soccer mom and I think John could be a stress reliever for her.
Then the doctor chapter. I liked this scene. Not as much as the mother of the 2 girls giantess, but this woman knows how to tease. She uses her sex appeal to seduce John and try to make him spill his secrets. I bet he will tell her about his sexual experiences and even do the same things to him during therapy.
Overall, of the last 4 chapters, the young soccer mom stood out to me, probably becuase she seems like the giantess that I want to please. She is busy, hardworking and has to raise 2 little girls. I think she deserves a tiny man to satisfy her and I would love to see John fill that role. Also, it could be that we haven't seen her sexual interests, but only her maternal instincts to rescue him and that's what attracted me. If she does get a sudden interest for John, I hope she is one of those horny women that decide to use John for her pleasure in secret and perhaps hide him from her husband if he is present. I'm not interested in her little girls, just the mother.
Since these are excerpts, I doubt suggestions or ideas affect this story since you already have a list to write about. My idea would be that when John is about 2-5 inches tall, the young soccer mom might put him down the front of her panties and hide him there. That's my dream, but I assume you already got plans so I doubt that idea will make it in this story.
Anyway, I'm glad this story got a lot more chapters since I last read it. I can't wait for the next chapter!
I'm sure if the circumstances presented themselves she could always make a surprise cameo again, he he.
I didn't really see the sister being an improved version of the mother however, I actually saw it as a contrast between a mental war and a physical one that each different lady would present for John. Or at least that's why I was tring to convey. Whether I succeeded or not is another story indeed. ;)
I liked the escape chapter more than any other too.. I did it to remind the readers that this is not just a suck and fuck fest. I'm actually trying to write a story (however fragmented the style may make it appear to be).. And if the readers are only hear for the sex then there will be a few chapters that might truly turn out to be disappointments for them.
As for the doctor or any other chapter that comes along, I'll try to give a different slant on his predicament and those details may or may not be as tantalizing to some of the readers but we can't please everyone all of the time so why even try I figure.
The next chapter might take a bit as I'm going to have to wait and see what situation hits my mind as "truly screwed up" next... I'll see what comes along because I'm not even sure at this point.. I wish I could say that I'm several chapters ahead and I've got it all worked out but I don't... Perhaps that's how I'll keep it more spontaneous and orgainic? Who knows, he he
Thanks a lot for the chapter reviews Tom.. They help me see my chapters even more clearly if you can believe that or not.
Date: April 07 2018 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love how it starts out with them complaining about being grabbed at will and then Dr. McPherson just reaches in and grabs Shiela. Later she comes back for the shoe. Love how she plays with it between her thumb and forefinger.
Dr. McPherson is a sexual lady who can bring pleasure or pain to get what she wants.
Loved her comment saying I'll be back to collect you. Then when she returns she just lays her hand out flat. She doesn't ask him to climb on, she expects the little man to obey her.
She is a sexual lady. She can give pleasure or pain to get what she wants. Will there be another lady who will give him a needle or a rectale thermometer at some point or both?
Love that his wife has a carrying case for him. Simple, logical and demeaning all at the same time.
Well we haven't gotten to the medical exams yet Diesel but we will get there rest assure. ;)
And yes, a caryin case would be all of those things which I plan on exploring in a future chapter as well.
The thing about the shoe just seemed like something that might naturally happen as demeaning as it would from John's point of view as sometimes people do and say things without thinking of the immediate ramifications of those actions.
Thanks a lot for noticing the little gems that I sprinkled throughout this chapter Diesel! :)
Date: April 07 2018 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
That's some powerful theropy. I wonder how his interactions with his family will be when he reaches on inch.
Probably not... Well he'll have to cross that bridge when he gets there, he he.
Powerful therapy indeed though I agree. ;)
Thank you very much for the comments Kane. :)