Date: June 17 2018 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
Such a great chapter. He really is in a giant's world now!
Author's Response:
He truly is.. In spite of how he may feel or what other distractions might be taking his mind elsewhere.
Thanks Babyzoe. :)
Date: March 31 2018 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
I certainly don't expect you to put out a chapter every day. Steven King doesn't go at that pace. I was just trying to infer that I enjoy your writing.
I also don't read stories for the sexual parts of the story. I prefer the stories that are about being small and the way people treat you when you are smaller. They treat you as you are less important and often humiliate you and treat you as if you don't matter.
Loving it,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Yeah I know that you weren't expecting that Diesel.. I was just putting that out there for everyone but didnt' really know how to articulate that so left it open ended. So not to worry. ;)
I'm very glad that everything doesn't have to be a orgasm fest for you as I suspect it does have to be for some others too!!
Thank you Diesel as always. :)
Date: March 31 2018 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
the chapter was fun, maybe he could have ask to the mother of two girls for help or a ride to sheila house.
Author's Response:
Yeah but then they'd want to let him in for his own safety and his plan would probably go astray once again. At least that what I had him figuring. ;)
Date: March 30 2018 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
I can hardly wait until he is in the lab. Having him get needles and maybe a thermometer or something else in his behind would be cool and humiliating. Love Nurse's taking charge or having their own sadistic fun. For as you say, his own good. Nothing like an anal probe in the morning when you are 4 inches tall.
Author's Response:
Oh the lab scene will rear it's ugly head rest assured Diesel.. So please have patience with that one, he he he.
And I think the size that I had him pegged at for that particular scene was 3.25 inches. :)
Date: March 30 2018 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
I don't think the Mother would have beat the girls to him either. But she didn't have too. If the girls were not there, I think the Mother would have grabbed him herself. Her footsteps would have covered too much ground compared to his tiny legs.
I am greatly enjoying your adaptation of the ISM. I look everyday for it. You have such a grasp on characters and how to make things so lifelike. It makes me feel like I am there.
Author's Response:
True. Very true.
Making you feel like you're there is my primary goal... That's why details are so important.. As are emotions and mental thoughts of the characters involved..
I spent a lot of time on this chapter and took my time with it as well.. I don't want to risk over exposure here so ask that you please forgive me if chapters are not submitted every night. I do have another chapter ready to go though which will explore another aspect of the psychological side of things..
I also didn't want the story to bog down into a sex fest every single chapter either as this would make it very one dimensional.. So hopefully people can bear with it when he's not having his organ drained, he he he.
Thanks again Diesel! :)
Date: March 30 2018 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
An exciting chapter. I understand his trying to get away but there are so many people and animals to hide from. So many mini adventures and dangers.
Having the Mother eventually spot him sealed his doom. He never could have escaped from her. Having her lackies run and capture him was easy. She need only raise her voice to get him in her hands. Loved the girls wanting to keep him. They will always wish they could have kept him. I was wondering if Mrs. Pedraison would be home? I wonder how she might have disciplined him once the Mother handed him over and mentioned where he was. Cool chapter.
Author's Response:
I decided to end the chapter and not go into that scenario with the Mother in Law (but the thought of her catching him and those reprecussions did definately float through my mind) because I had busted over 4000 words for that chapter and didn't want to risk straining people's attention spans anymore than I probably already had done... Usually I stop at around 2500 words per chapter so this one was really long.
I think she couldn't have beat the girls to him even if she tried though.. That being the girls main driving ambition at that moment.
But she did the next best thing and allowed her daughters to do the leg work for her literally.
Thanks again for your thoughtful and indepth analysis of this story Diesel. It's wonderful to know that some people are definately paying attention which makes me extra cautious now, ha ha ha.!
[Report This]Date: March 30 2018 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
"he belongs to someone and we’ve got to return him" He's not even considered a person now to the people around him. At 12 inches that would make him Hot Toys size or the size of a Barbie Doll. Now more than ever I'm curious to see what you have planned as he gets smaller.
Author's Response:
I was wondering if anyone was going to catch that.. Glad to see that it definately did not escape your attention Kane..
I figured that some people would just callously assume that he was owned or possessed by a legal gaurdian of some sort.. Humiliating as that would be.
Thanks a lot for the comments and the good eye Kane. :)