Reviewer: Shrinker82 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 21 2020 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 3

I must say, I really like the dynamic between John and the mother-in-law; the whole “little talk” while she’s giving him a handjob is really hot! This scene has actually inspired me to not only put something similar in one of my upcoming stories, but practically frame a whole novel around it: The dominating mother-in-law and the shrinking man—the smaller he gets, the more domineering she becomes.

Very good and inspiring chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the excellent review Shrinker82!  I'm very happy to have inspired you and will have to go  check out that story that you are eluding to.

I'm currently editing "A Stter for the Summer" and will be turning it into an actual physical hard copy in the near future as a paperback novel.

You can find my Deviant Art page where I will announce it's publishing date and details on how to order it here: https://www.deviantart.com/crocodilewriter

I hope to see you there and also hope that you will purchase a copy of it when it is ready.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2018 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 3

Chapter 3 was very exciting. Right from the beginning Mrs. Pedriason sets the tone by slightly knocking and then entering. She doesn't need permission to enter. She just enters. Love that She's very intelligent. I am sure she looked down on him when he was tall, but now even more so. Now John is baby size. Will she wear heels in the future, maybe when he's even smaller?
Her walking past him also let him know that he will get out of her way and not the other way around. This also is good advice for his inevitable future. Her comments about eventually moving into her house also sound like a prophecy. I wonder who in the family eventually buys him a dollhouse to live in? Love her calling him little johnny and other belittling terms.
Her patting the sofa with her hand was authoritative. Come here little one is what she meant. His pitiful attempts to climb the sofa just further show how he needs adults. Having her Massive Hands grab him so easily is frightening. I hope at some point her Massive Hands lift him up and lay him belly down across her lap. Then she pulls his little pants and underwear down for a spanking as only Mrs. Pedraison can give.
Her releasing him was a treat. How lucky he is. She can show kindness, if he is obedient. She controls him now.
Loved Mrs. Pedraison's explenation of how things will proceed. I expect you to obey me. Her threat of stepping on him later on was scary and real.
I greatly enjoyed her, the I will not ask you again statement was Awesome. He is being treated as a child. john had better learn to obey her the first time she says something. Will he answer her with Yes Ma'am to show respect to her?
I really enjoyed this chapter so much. I can see the Mother In Law will be a phenomenal character. You have set the stage and you have so many different Women in his small life.
Love it,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Everytime you give a review Diesel there's not need to have anymore. He, he, he.

You really do cover all of the bases. 

And yes, there are many women in this man's life and some more that have not been introduced yet to come. ;)

I certainly would not rule out a spanking or something else even more humiliating which comes to her intelligent mind.   The fact that she knows how to wield power, pleasure, and pain has John very off balance right now..  It will be very difficult for him to get his equilibrium with a woman so daunting to I'd wager. ;)

 

Thanks again for the excellent analysis Diesel..   We'll see if I can't take a more psychological dive in the next chapter. ;)

Reviewer: Kane001 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2018 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

There goes the last lingering piece of John’s manhood. I'm curious to see how this plays out. Especially since she's pretty much threatened to step on him. 

Author's Response:

Yeah, evil women when givne free rain will do evil things.

Thanks for the comments Kane. :)