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Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2018 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 3

Mother-in-law did show to John she's law and Order haha Brillant chapter !

Author's Response:

That she is indeed!!  Old habits might just be hard for her to break, ha haha!

Thanks a lot for the words Smoki. :)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25 2018 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 3

Chapter 3 was very exciting. Right from the beginning Mrs. Pedriason sets the tone by slightly knocking and then entering. She doesn't need permission to enter. She just enters. Love that She's very intelligent. I am sure she looked down on him when he was tall, but now even more so. Now John is baby size. Will she wear heels in the future, maybe when he's even smaller?
Her walking past him also let him know that he will get out of her way and not the other way around. This also is good advice for his inevitable future. Her comments about eventually moving into her house also sound like a prophecy. I wonder who in the family eventually buys him a dollhouse to live in? Love her calling him little johnny and other belittling terms.
Her patting the sofa with her hand was authoritative. Come here little one is what she meant. His pitiful attempts to climb the sofa just further show how he needs adults. Having her Massive Hands grab him so easily is frightening. I hope at some point her Massive Hands lift him up and lay him belly down across her lap. Then she pulls his little pants and underwear down for a spanking as only Mrs. Pedraison can give.
Her releasing him was a treat. How lucky he is. She can show kindness, if he is obedient. She controls him now.
Loved Mrs. Pedraison's explenation of how things will proceed. I expect you to obey me. Her threat of stepping on him later on was scary and real.
I greatly enjoyed her, the I will not ask you again statement was Awesome. He is being treated as a child. john had better learn to obey her the first time she says something. Will he answer her with Yes Ma'am to show respect to her?
I really enjoyed this chapter so much. I can see the Mother In Law will be a phenomenal character. You have set the stage and you have so many different Women in his small life.
Love it,

Author's Response:

Everytime you give a review Diesel there's not need to have anymore. He, he, he.

You really do cover all of the bases. 

And yes, there are many women in this man's life and some more that have not been introduced yet to come. ;)

I certainly would not rule out a spanking or something else even more humiliating which comes to her intelligent mind.   The fact that she knows how to wield power, pleasure, and pain has John very off balance right now..  It will be very difficult for him to get his equilibrium with a woman so daunting to I'd wager. ;)


Thanks again for the excellent analysis Diesel..   We'll see if I can't take a more psychological dive in the next chapter. ;)

Reviewer: logan9 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2018 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 3

fantastic addition, great story telling

Author's Response:

I appreciate your words Logan, as they enourage me to keep going. :)

Reviewer: Kane001 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 24 2018 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

There goes the last lingering piece of John’s manhood. I'm curious to see how this plays out. Especially since she's pretty much threatened to step on him. 

Author's Response:

Yeah, evil women when givne free rain will do evil things.

Thanks for the comments Kane. :)

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