Wow! This chapter felt very complete and real. The first chapter was a great tease as we see Sarah take John upstairs. I wanted to see what happened upstairs tho. You just had to leave us hanging.

In this chapter, I love the setting. The nuclear disaster of Fukushima causing the shrinking which might make us mutants one day. Some of us become xmen, and I wish my power would be to shrink and become indestrutable.

Also, you used San Francisco and Sacramento. I been to both cities, so it felt close to home. Perhaps, I might get hit with this disease.

I loved this chapter. It broke stereotypes. Usually the cable guy is a guy, but this time it's a woman, and not just any woman, but a pretty college girl. Also, as this girl just stares at John, it's similar to how guys stare at girls. I mention this becuase I had a female friend who kept having problems with her apartment and the same guy kept showing up to fix it, but he kept complimenting and staring at her instead of doing his job in a timely manner. She thinks he also half-assed the job, just so he can return back to "fix" it again. So it's kinda cool to see everything flipped in this scene and through John, I can understand how my friend was feeling.

This scene was sexy regardless of the moral story. If I was in John's position, I wouldn't mind this girl having her way with me. The way he described her was pretty positive. Still, Sarah was super sexy last chapter even though it was just a tease. I want more of Sarah's intimate moments with John, but this chapter was also quite nice.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Well, you will get more of Sarah Mr.Speedy, he he.

Cool chapter. So the Mother in law left him home alone. Interesting. I can see why he enjoyed her being away. I am sure to the cable lady he looked adorable in his baby like clothes. I liked that she bended down to at least try to not be so imposing.
I wonder if he will get on the internet and write some things about his Mother in law. Maybe she will see what he wrote and take the controls and his freedom away.
I wonder if he will try to stand up to her only to have her act as the adult and punish him as a child.
I am loving this story. So many possibilities. The fact that so many others are experiencing what it's like to be small is fascinating. Slowly reducing in size all over the world. I know you will explore him at every size. I do love the baby size. He's an adult but so weak and helpless. His not being able to reach the doorknob shows how he really needs a full size adult there. Will he answer his Mother in law respectfully and answer her with Yes Ma'am?
Loving it,
Diesel

Author's Response:

You've touched on a lot of interesting aspects here Diesel...  I wanted give the story more possibilities for interactions on his scale than the original story allowed, although it did have him falling for a midjet lady in it's defense.