Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2018 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's between a sitter for summer and in the name of science. Loved them both. But I found in the name of science, chilling. The fear of seeing her Giantess hand is exciting to me. I also believe her core temperature readings on him will be while he's awake now. So my opinion is, In the name of science.

Author's Response:

Yes, In the Name of Science is a truly chilling tale.  I agree with you there. That's for sure!

I got the idea of the anal probing from a story that I read at Tiny Guy's site (a GTS site now defunct for several years) about eighteen years ago.  My God has it been that long?  Sheesh!

The writer had talked about a couple who were abducting people at random and the nurse wife was administering core temperature tests with a rectal thermometer...  The writer unfortunately moved the story to a private site as he termed it because he was afraid that minors were reading it.   I was pretty upset that the writer had chosen to be so cavalier about doing something and then not telling the readers where they could find the next installments...  I think if I were to meet him today I'd punch him in the nose for being such a coward and doing such a nonsensical act seeming how all has been fine for internet writers of GTS genre all the way up to this day.  The paranoia proving to be unsubstantiated for over twenty years now.

I've asked people over the years if they remember that story and nobody seems to have, much less saved it...     So, In the Name of Science is kind of my way to continue it.

I have even considered doing my own mock up of the story or rewrite if you will just to keep it for internet reader's and posterities sake.

Oh, and to anyone who reads this reply and knows the story that I'm talking about, I'll give you a free whole story commission if you can provide me with it.

Sorry for the diatribe with the minor digression but it was the inspiration I had to include it in the above mentioned story and this one in the epilogue.

 

And Thanks a lot Diesel and everyone else for reading this story if I didn't already say that!

 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2018 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

@crocodile,

Hmm. I really want to keep guessing, but now I wonder if I’m going to guess the right events going to take place.

That’s not going to stop me from analyzing the future though. :)

Hmm. You say that my predictions were wrong. Perhaps Mary decides to talk to the group and figure out what is happening. She recognizes John and gives him the benefit of the doubt. Maybe she kills Kurtis and his goons because John asked her to.

Or Mary decides to keep all the tinies to herself and not even give them to her daughters. Maybe she puts Kurtis’s thugs in her shoes, and then puts Kurtis inside her asshole. Then for the 2 good guys, she keeps them in her bra, one in each bra cup.

Oh no. The worst possible idea would be that Mary just kills everyone except John and she returns John to John’s family. Now that would be boring. I’m hoping she has some fun with at least one tiny. Please tell me this idea is also wrong. Lol.

Oh, this idea is a total stretch. Kurtis used to be Mary’s husband and she finally recognizes him. Mary takes them all home and we see her evil side as she gives them all strict rules. She takes Kurtis and punishes him in front of the other guys. Some are painful and some are sexual. Eventually, she kills him and the guys get scared.

Ok, this idea might seem more realistic. Being the lovely soccer mom she is, Mary takes them all home and feeds them. She takes good care of them, but doesn’t let them leave except John whom she trusts. John doesn’t want to leave Nate alone with the thugs so John decides to stay, but he freely wanders her house. Then the next few chapters detail their everydaily lives.

How about this: Mary captures them all and gives up Kurtis and his thugs to security. Mary decides to let Nate remain free in the mall after John tells her. Then Mary decides to keep John for herself and remembers the time she held John in her hands, her fingers feeling him up and savoring that memory. She holds him close to her chest and feels his little heartbeat. John can’t help but feel aroused as this young soccer mom presses him into her chest. She smiles and tells John that he is safe and she takes him home and so on...

Ok, I think I’m running out of ideas now. I love making predictions about sexy situations such as this!

You don’t have to say which ones are right or wrong, but I am curious about your thoughts on my random ideas.

Author's Response:

I liked your idea of Mary being Kurtis's exwife!  Why didn't I think of that?  

Some of your other ones are like.. Whew!  Talk about a  Friday the 13th gore movie twist! 

But suffice it to say, all of your guesses, though intriguing are incorrect. 

You wont have long to wait Tom...  This much I assure you of.  But rest assured, everybody get's what's coming to them. ;)

Thanks again Tom! :)

 

Reviewer: closetslave1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2018 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

Another great chapter. I'm really loving this story as the tension really is quite indescribable. I must confess that I too was hoping that Rebecca would grab herself some new toys. I dunno what it is about those younger giantesses, but they always seem to be so cruel, and yet at the same time nonchallant in the way they treat their tiny charges.

Can't wait for the next chapter...

Author's Response:

Not to give away any spoilers but ...  Well, just keep reading Closetslave. :)

Rebecca was just used as a ploy to show what horrors many people would be regularly experiencing out there if that reality were a true one..  I also wanted to use her as a source to save the guys rather than abduct them and save them with nothing more than her ominous presense alone.

But I do agree with you how young people can be very cruel and selfish which somebody drastically reduced in size would have to put up with whether they wanted to or not.  That in itself is something that seems to be overlooked a lot in this genre for some strange reason.   Her brother Paul will always have to be av victim of her impulses and he will be one probably for the rest of his life.

 

The next chatper will be very soon Closetslave and thank you for chiming in with some comments as they are truly appreciated!

 

 

Reviewer: johnsmith10992 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2018 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Any possibility you might continue?

Author's Response:

I'm thinking this weekend but don't hold me too it. ;)

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2018 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Don't worry my review will be short!Great chapter!

Author's Response:

I don't mind long reviews, really I enjoy them. :)

Thanks a lot Smoki for enjoying this chapter and voicing such pleasure!!!

Reviewer: Layston Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12 2018 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

Been enjoying this story quite a bit. I love slow shrink stories, how men go from normal height to being handheld and beyond. I know this story isn't following a chronologic order, but I'm loving how with each size change, his family treats him differently. 

Thanks for such a wonderful story!

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot Layston.  I'm not binding myself to chronological order yet still doing it some however abstinius that it may be if you've noticed..  The first few chapters were spurts to smaller and smaller sizes.  Now that's been accomplished I'll be able to jump around anywhere that inspiration hits.   I didn't want to be tied down to a long slow progression which makes sense for many stories out there. .  I'm guilty of it myself (and not that there's any true guilt to be attached here.) but wanted to break out of that mold for a change and  have been very happy with the liberation that it affords.

I'm sure a creative writing instructor whould have fits when they saw what I was doing here, but writing out of the box never stopped guys like William Burroughs now did it? Ha, ha.

You are very much welcome Layston and please do not be a stranger to comments to upcoming chapters in the future. :)

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2018 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm rooting for his mother in law, but regardless this story is very very promising.

Not like you didn't know already given all the comments, but still..

Author's Response:

Well I wouldn't count her out by any means as she is a main character in this story so just hang in there Rooto and I'm sure she's bound to make another appearance soon. ;)

Thanks a lot for the comments as I truly appreciate them. :)

Reviewer: 003 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01 2018 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very nice, news? 

Author's Response:

What news?  You mean update?

Reviewer: 003 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2018 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ok grazie, comunque sono italiano .... Ah ah ah

Author's Response:

Sure, whatever.

Reviewer: ColdAtlas Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2018 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Liking the direction so far! The random order of the events helps the pace as well. Karen might be my favorite so far. Sounds like that small fling might not the last I bet.

Author's Response:

Thanks for briging up the random order issue ColdAlas..     Because this is the core of the engine of this story.

I wanted to get away from the very slow methodical grind that most of these shrinking stories must give service to.

I wanted to have the freedom to get an inspiration and present it to you all that very night and not have to leave it in the notes for weeks on end and risk it becoming stale or impractical by the time that I got to it as has happened to some of my other story ideas due to the chains of chronological rules.

The problem with this is remembering what came when and is the trade-off that I've already noticed..   But that's my cross to bare on this particular writing style attempt.. 

I'm liking it a lot though as it allows me to nail things right out of the starting gate which is so liberating I am finding.    A word of note to some of you other writers who might be readig these reviews. ;)

Thanks a lot for bringing the random order aspect to the forefront with your comments ColdAtlas. ;)