Date: June 19 2018 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
Things are getting really interesting. I hope John's situation gets better, but something tells me I shouldn't hold my breath.
I'm glad that it hs piqued your interest Kane.. That's what this is all about after all... Thanks a lot for giving me some comments on this! :)
Date: June 18 2018 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
I don't know how I feel about there being other tinies in this story. I loved just having John and a few giantesses here and there.
Well, this is a 2-parter and I'm not quite sure what to think of this first part. Kinda silly how John got so angry at Sarah like that. She even had a rule about a safety belt so it's completely John's fault.
I'm still hoping that Sarah and John gets some fun time soon considering I kinda forgot this story and had to recap it before reading this chapter.
Actually, thinking about the other chapters, I would love to see that soccer mom make a reappearance in this story. Perhaps, she finds John at this mall and decides to keep him for herself and even hide him from her daughter's. Total stretch suggestion, but I still loved chapter 5 the most, so I can't help it.
This new black guy seems to have been through quite the journey. I wonder if he had some sexy adventures that he would like to share with John.
"So I met this girl named Sarah...." John glares at him in response. Haha.
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Not to worry, the focus will remain on Johh, but not to forget, he's not the only one who has contracted the shrinking disease therefore others (though not to become central characters) will come into the fray from time to time for the sake of plausibility.
Also, sometimes our emotions take us past the prudent sensibilities.. Having become overwhelmed by them (even though he's in the wrong), he will now have to cope with the consquences of them... We'va all had temper tantrums before that exceed the boundries of right and wrong might I remind you of.. John is a human still and therefore subject to those same extremities as the rest of us are.
I like the idea of the soccer mom making another appearance a lot.. I'm going to have to give this a lot of thought and thanks for bringing up that.
I'll get into the black man's history some too.. He will not be a card board cut out I assure you. He, he.
Thanks a lot for the critical assessment of this chapter Tom as I've got a lot of things to think about for the next one now too. ;)
Date: June 17 2018 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
By the way when I think of Dr. Johnson, I think of the gray haired lady scientist in the isw. When she leans in a places her face in front of the cage, it's chilling.
Yes, that was a very chilling scene... How she could dominate just be leering and changing the tone of her voice with threats that the lady knew she could back up.
I'm with you on that. ;)
Date: June 17 2018 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
First off, love the carrying cage. I feel his anger but not buckling in is his fault. But you would expect more compassion from your wife. But when you're small they just naturally treat you differently. Love that Sarah was quick to answer back. She obviously had seen his little fits before and there's no reason why the lady who controls everything and provides everything should have to put up with a tiny angry man.
Learning that they do move in with the Mother In Law is logical and exciting news. It only makes sense because of her wealth that she take in her daughter and her diminutive husband. I'm sure in the flashback he adheres to her rules. After all he will be living in her house.
He really blew it with his language toward his wife. That was definitely a finalizing scene. Now he is up the creek without a paddle.
It's interesting that he runs into someone at the mall. It's also interesting how he finds how insignificant he is now. He could be crushed by anyone at the mall without them hardly noticing him. There are footsteps everywhere. Will Sarah look for him? Will she care? She could collect him again out of pity or she could say adios little man.
His moving in with the Mother In Law will be a fascinating chapter. I like that you go back and forth in time to show how he got to where he's at. I'm sure his anger builds from the constant lack of respect or caring about his feelings. Part 2 will be so cool. You really do a great job of putting the reader in his shoes. Tiny shoes at that. You make it realistic. What could happen to you at various sizes as you slowly shrink? This will be a story that I will read over and over.
Wow! I'm glad that you really like this story Diesel!
Putting the reader in the protagonist's shoes should be a priority for any writer I've come to believe. So yeah, that's what I'm trying to do here. It is the stories that do that and fill in the mundane blanks whose importance is often overlooked that I strive to give back to the reader.
I don't want to give spoilers on Sarah so I wont, but your musings are on the right tracks. ;)
When we are so hurt and upset we do sometimes go overboard with our language.. I'm guilty of it myself to be honest.. And then we have not only repair the damage of past events, but shore up the damage of our mouths too. John has lost almost everything but is still right there to observe the things that he's lost so his extremes of anger are plausible in my view, even when they go too far.
Yes, I'm sure you will find part 2 intersting as I try to explore the realities of a ground level experience.
Thanks again Diesel! :)
Date: June 16 2018 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
What a pleasant surprise! Glad you’re back. Still hooked as usual, not sure I trust the guy he just ran into though...
Glad to see you in the comments section too John! I'll have the second part up soon without a long delay this time.. That project I'm working on is on the downhill slide now with most of the hard work a thing of the past so I'm getting more free time to think and write again.
See you at the next chapter I hope. :)
Date: June 16 2018 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great to see you back. Love your ability to make me feel like im actually there in the giant world you created. Thanks for sharing man! Looking forward to more!
And you'll get more too Logan! Thank you very much for the warm welcome back as it's truly appreciated. :)
I'll try to have the next part up soon. ;)
Date: June 01 2018 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please don’t give up on this. You built it up so well with such a great story and characters.
Oh I haven't given up John. :)
I'm currently renovating and expanding the size of a old bathroom that was built back in the 50s so has a lot of things wrong with it and is demanding a lot of physical labor in order to restore as a result. But I've had some ideas too while I've been pulling things out of walls that never should have been put there to begin with.. So don't worry my friend.. Once I get a little closer to finishing that project I'm probably going to post another chapter... ;) Thanks a lot for the concerns and kind words John... You're the type of person that makes this writing thing worth while. :)
I'm currently renovating and expanding the size of a old bathroom that was built back in the 50s so has a lot of things wrong with it and is demanding a lot of physical labor in order to restore as a result.
But I've had some ideas too while I've been pulling things out of walls that never should have been put there to begin with.. So don't worry my friend.. Once I get a little closer to finishing that project I'm probably going to post another chapter... ;)
Thanks a lot for the concerns and kind words John... You're the type of person that makes this writing thing worth while. :)
Date: April 24 2018 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it! Perhaps some of that 6-inch ravishing with sister-in-law Karen is in the works? Either way, I’m hooked and can’t wait to read what’s in store!
There's more in store. I need to cover his wife for one thing, he he. . I'm just very busy with some mundane life stuff right now... Thanks a lot for your positive words and continual support Johnsmith. :)
Date: April 16 2018 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
What a thrilling chapter. Right away the reader finds out a little about life in the carrying case. After the Nurse unlatches his door he unbuckled. Nice to know that his safety is thought of when he is in the carrying cage. Knowing, I guess from experience to come out of the cage when called upon or else risk her Gigantic Hand entering the cage to remove him.
Loved the description of the cold metal table and the colossal omnipotent ladies.
Great choices in having the younger Asian lady and the more experienced grayish doctor. I can clearly see these type of doctors in this situation. Nurse Hikiro moves him from station to station talking to him like he was a baby. The humiliation of disrobing in front of her and then her eventually crumbling it in her hand to dispose of it in her pocket really makes you feel small. You could never retrieve it until she decides that you can have it.
The walk to the weigh in and the head idea for measuring were great.
Loved her All Powerful Fingers holding him in place as she probed him. I will definitely read this chapter more than once.
Once he gets strapped in I love how her Gigantic Face smiles when he struggles to try and get free. I am sure it amuses her as she has seen many other tiny men trying to escape. Dr. Johnson is fantastic as he screams and cusses. She calmly reminds him of the fine print. I think she enjoys her control over tiny men on a daily basis.
Loved how Dr.Johnson explains things to him and grins before he is grabbed and dropped back in his cage. Certainly a punishment for his rude behavior. Now he gets to go back to his caregiver. Great wording. As I said, I will read this numerous times. It was a treat. Will he be examined by Dr. Johnson again in the future. I doubt She will as gentle the next time she see's him.
Hold on, I'm going to go make a cup of coffee so that I can read your review Diesel as I know that it's going to be very indepth! Ha, ha.! But I look forward to them so I'll be right back! ;)
Ok, reading now....
Ah, yes well I'm very happy that you noticed the little subtle details once again.. I've actually had some people say that I talk about things that don't have a bearing on the matter but I disagree with them.. Everything counts I theorize and am glad that this little theory of mine is validated by your recognition Diesel. :)
I tried to be somewhat generic with their faces giving the reader the bare bones minimum so that they could feel in the blanks within the framework that I made for them.. In other words I wanted the ready to put their own lady from someone that they know in their real lives on the face bases that they had before them.. I don't really like it when the author does all of the work and says something like "She was a Jenneifer Aniston look alike." That robs the reader of their own imaginations which I think is unfair.. I'll only break this rule when I have a very powerful character to submit though.
I think you might see those two again further down the road as I know that you enjoy these types of scenes as much as I do going off of past experiences. :)
And yes, she does geta sadistic thrill from dominating and inflicting pain or pleasure... The nurse is a complimentary sister in arms too!
Thanks again for a great thought provoking review Diesel!!! You might want to become a professional for this community on the matter. ;)
Date: April 16 2018 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
Man I don't know what was worst for John, the anal probe, the rape, or the fact he'll probably never be able to leave. It's like a snowball effect, the situation just got worst and worst and worst.
Maybe he'll get a big poster for the wall of his cell that they won't look behind for a while. Looking forward to the next installment.
Thanks a lot Kane... It's the old adage, from bad to worse that comes to mind. And yes, he was really put through the ringer this time... Hence he was pretty broke down when he was carried back to his minder at the end.
He, he. thanks a lot for the review and comments Kane. :)
Date: April 15 2018 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
Back to back medical chapters? I'm so used to the random order that I wasn't expecting another doctor to be in this chapter.
So this is the yearly appointment which John has to take. Just so they can check up on him, right? They are monitoring his size and physical conditions to see if anything has changed. I love how they use every...kind of test. Seemed like it.
My favorite scene was obviously when John was tied up with those restraints and then the young nurse shoved her nipple into his mouth to help stimulate his erection. I'm a big fan of bondage, so this was super sexy. I'm not exactly a boob/nipple fan, but I'm sure John is. If that was me, that nipple wouldn't have helped my erection much. A face full of pussy on the other hand will definately get me going. Imagine a giantess pussy ready to swallow you up and you can let escape with all those restraints on you.
Random side note: I love how you reply to reviews quickly. Makes me feel that my review was important enough to be read, and also you give me time to respond to your replies if necessary.
Anyway, I loved this chapter and I can't wait for that neighborhood soccer mom, Mary from chapter 5 to show up again. I bet John's first appearance to her has got Mary thinking of ways to get herself more aquianted. I'm already daydreaming!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
I understand what you're saying about a face full of love canal... But you gotta throw the breast guys/gals a bone too... And that's the fundamental challenge that I face with every chapter.. How to give everyone something.. I've realized that you really can't do that and have it make sense so you have to sprinkle the goodies along the course of the whole story. It's just keeping people interested long enough to hold out for their particular likes that becomes the real challenge... Stories can be hard that way... But if you can keep them that interested to hold out then you've beat the boredom odds.
I had not planned on doing back to back medical chapters to be quite honest.. This turned out to be a accident actually.. But yeah, I would expect him to have all kinds of specialists trying to dissect him in various ways if he were indeed cooperating with a goverment research program..
Actually this was his weekly appointment though Tom.. Not his yearly.. You can go back and double check but I do believe I stressed that. he he.
I'm glad that you liked this chapter. I might try to change things up some in a couple of chapters from now. So be ready, he, he.
Date: April 13 2018 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
I literally check this site everyday for the next update. You’ve got yourself a gem right here. Please keep it going :)
Well then I'm sorry that I didn't deliver tonight.. I've just been really worn out from a job that I'm doing that requires a lot of physical excertion these last few days.. I'll try to have something soon though.
Hang in there John and thanks for enjoying this story. :)
Date: April 12 2018 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Been enjoying this story quite a bit. I love slow shrink stories, how men go from normal height to being handheld and beyond. I know this story isn't following a chronologic order, but I'm loving how with each size change, his family treats him differently.
Thanks for such a wonderful story!
Thanks a lot Layston. I'm not binding myself to chronological order yet still doing it some however abstinius that it may be if you've noticed.. The first few chapters were spurts to smaller and smaller sizes. Now that's been accomplished I'll be able to jump around anywhere that inspiration hits. I didn't want to be tied down to a long slow progression which makes sense for many stories out there. . I'm guilty of it myself (and not that there's any true guilt to be attached here.) but wanted to break out of that mold for a change and have been very happy with the liberation that it affords.
I'm sure a creative writing instructor whould have fits when they saw what I was doing here, but writing out of the box never stopped guys like William Burroughs now did it? Ha, ha.
You are very much welcome Layston and please do not be a stranger to comments to upcoming chapters in the future. :)
Date: April 08 2018 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hmm. Haven't read this story in a while. Just read chapters 3-6.
The mother in law chapter was nice. She established her role as being dominant and also convinced John to keep their new relationships status as a secret.
Then the sister in law chapter was just an improved version of her mother. She got an amazing ass scene and I loved how she was grinding on John on that couch. While the mother used more seductive words to control John, his sister in law was more physical. I like that, especially a mix of both words and actions so this was nice.
The escape chapter was by far my favorite chapter. Even though it didn't have any sexual situations with the family, I am intrigued by the mother of those 2 girls. Her initial reaction was of shock and soon after she composed herself, began fondling him, I assume to make sure he is real and to convince herself of that fact. As she dropped him off, I love how attached she was to John and her reluctance to let him go while also being careful of making sure he is returned safely. I would love to see this mother again. I think her name was Mary, what a nice name. I forgot most of the other giantess names but not Mary. She is special to me. I hope next time, she decides to have some fun if she sees little John again. She gives me this vibe of a sexy wife who misses her husband and would love to have John as a someone or perhaps soemthing to fill that void in her life. You said she was a soccer mom and I think John could be a stress reliever for her.
Then the doctor chapter. I liked this scene. Not as much as the mother of the 2 girls giantess, but this woman knows how to tease. She uses her sex appeal to seduce John and try to make him spill his secrets. I bet he will tell her about his sexual experiences and even do the same things to him during therapy.
Overall, of the last 4 chapters, the young soccer mom stood out to me, probably becuase she seems like the giantess that I want to please. She is busy, hardworking and has to raise 2 little girls. I think she deserves a tiny man to satisfy her and I would love to see John fill that role. Also, it could be that we haven't seen her sexual interests, but only her maternal instincts to rescue him and that's what attracted me. If she does get a sudden interest for John, I hope she is one of those horny women that decide to use John for her pleasure in secret and perhaps hide him from her husband if he is present. I'm not interested in her little girls, just the mother.
Since these are excerpts, I doubt suggestions or ideas affect this story since you already have a list to write about. My idea would be that when John is about 2-5 inches tall, the young soccer mom might put him down the front of her panties and hide him there. That's my dream, but I assume you already got plans so I doubt that idea will make it in this story.
Anyway, I'm glad this story got a lot more chapters since I last read it. I can't wait for the next chapter!
I'm sure if the circumstances presented themselves she could always make a surprise cameo again, he he.
I didn't really see the sister being an improved version of the mother however, I actually saw it as a contrast between a mental war and a physical one that each different lady would present for John. Or at least that's why I was tring to convey. Whether I succeeded or not is another story indeed. ;)
I liked the escape chapter more than any other too.. I did it to remind the readers that this is not just a suck and fuck fest. I'm actually trying to write a story (however fragmented the style may make it appear to be).. And if the readers are only hear for the sex then there will be a few chapters that might truly turn out to be disappointments for them.
As for the doctor or any other chapter that comes along, I'll try to give a different slant on his predicament and those details may or may not be as tantalizing to some of the readers but we can't please everyone all of the time so why even try I figure.
The next chapter might take a bit as I'm going to have to wait and see what situation hits my mind as "truly screwed up" next... I'll see what comes along because I'm not even sure at this point.. I wish I could say that I'm several chapters ahead and I've got it all worked out but I don't... Perhaps that's how I'll keep it more spontaneous and orgainic? Who knows, he he
Thanks a lot for the chapter reviews Tom.. They help me see my chapters even more clearly if you can believe that or not.
Date: April 07 2018 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm rooting for his mother in law, but regardless this story is very very promising.
Not like you didn't know already given all the comments, but still..
Well I wouldn't count her out by any means as she is a main character in this story so just hang in there Rooto and I'm sure she's bound to make another appearance soon. ;)
Thanks a lot for the comments as I truly appreciate them. :)
Date: April 07 2018 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
First his sister in law and now his doctor? I'm starting to think losing your height is ALMOST like winning the jackpot with girls....that still see you as a person of course.
He, he, he... Yeah I guess in that respect that puts a good light on his predicament.. I suppose there's a positive way of looking at everything.. I'm glad that you've found it too ColdAtlast! :)