Date: July 26 2018 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
Chapter 6 and 7 were good, but the whole firefighter scene really bothered me.
Jenna saw the waitress frown and assumed that the firefighters were saying bad things. A firefighter could say that she is a great waitress and Amanda frowned wondering what her parents might think. Then Jenna decides to punish them for no reason. There is no evidence that the firefighters did anything wrong with this context.
In addition, chapter 7, Jenna told Ryan that the firefighters were harassing Amanda and they deserved it, but actually Jenna physically harassed Amanda by slapping her on the ass. Some other person might look from a distance and say that Jenna was harassing the waitress.
Of course Amanda smiled when she got slapped, but someone from the far end of the restaurant might not see it and assume that Amanda was being harassed by Jenna.
My point is that when I read chapter 6, I didnt see anything wrong that the firemen did, and after reading about Jenna punishing them, I had to read it over to see if they actually did soemthing, and they honestly didn't do anything. Jenna slapped Amanda and that's much more inappropriate in my perspective.
Chapter 6 felt like a group of innocent local heroes died to a giantess woman who "assumed" that they did something bad. I wasn't entertained by Jenna, I was mad at her and I think she is the one making the world full of suffering.
If you want to make the firefighters look bad, make them do soemthing specifically bad, and then continue to make them look like assholes throughout the whole chapter. They felt like average guys to me. I felt sorry for them.
Date: July 15 2018 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
i love this story, especially the end of the last chapter. that was so hot! it seems like she has a desire for anal and ryan doesn't, i hope that gets worked in to her interactions with tiny ryan, against his will, and even scat!
Date: June 18 2018 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
After so much time I thought had ended there but fortunately it didn't. I'm really happy to see that you are continuing this because I like your writting style and the concept of the story a lot. I can't wait for the giantess part. Good luck and keep up the good work :D
Author's Response: Thank you! Iím pretty good at procrastinating but Iíll do my best to keep up with it. :)