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Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2018 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

!!!! !!!!!!! What a surprise. YEES!! Thank you so so so much. You made my day with this, I couldnt believe it when I saw it and was so happy when I saw you had began a new tf mm story, and I began reading it and just "swallowed" it up in minutes and read it like three times in a row. You are an incredible author. You just did it RIGHT again. I am usually a fan of pure unaware stories, but this one got totally to me too and I even enjoyed it somehow incredible much. Know what I love so much of your style? How you just have this talent of writing these teenagers totally plausible and logic. It is the simple things you think about and do just RIGHT. How he just got home after classes, and how he got the two slices of pizza and casually ate him in a bored way while going to his room? THAT I already loved! It would have been even more ironic and funny, if he maybe chewed with open mouth, scratched at his ass, and maybe even burped when he swallowed. I have actually a question here, which is really interesting to hink about. Is Ashely gay or straight? I actually would love to see him being straight, that would be really cruel to hink about how he enjoys and it makes him plesure, to torture some innocent random guys. The fact why I ask was, how he made this guy shrink and eat at work LOL, when he touched him on his butt or something, and was like the fuck, I am a guy. And then the part with the phone and he jerked off? I actually thought of, was he looking at some girl on there? But then he had pink bed covers, so this might be hinting he was gay. I actually would enjoy both, where both would have its own different kind of aspects. The idea with the tissue and the waste bin was so so so so hot. I even thought of him drying and then maybe one of the roomamtes would come in and use it too, maybe toilet paper was empty in the dorm toilet, and he takes it and use to wipe lol. Actually I find the idea of a college dorm plot incredible hot. I would totally wish for so many tf ideas, but also, hopefully his roommates wont be changed! I would prefer them be around, and be used in cruel unaware plots. For example turn some college class teacher maybe they all have together into an asshole of them, then also a tight underpants for him, maybe Ashely places in their room with laughter, then also maybe one of the roomates has a girl over to have sex with, and one unluck guy ends as his condom, and he casually removes it from his dick aftewards and throws the full used condom in his rooms bin too, where it would slowly sit, and the guy just "stare" in his head... silently... plop, plop, a bit of of cum dropping out of his "mouth". Then also turning maybe some asshole college jocks into two flys, who would end in a cruel way, when they try to get help from their best friends aka the roomaates of Ashely. Some food tf like the popcorn one with one ending as a kernel, that was so hot, would be cool too. Someone ending as a tiny little dingleberry in ones ass. One ending as a cum stain on one of the jocks bed covers, or drying in their boxers. UGH a college plot is so AWESOME. Imagine them having Friday Night parties in the college all the time, and just ugh... somany hot unlimited tf arcs imaginable. Rude cocky other college guys, a random guy, the pizza delivery man, teachers. I am so happy right about this story happening. I also liked how he made the guy just into a tissue for no reason, the begging was so hot, and just someone ending in a waste bin is so cruel to think about. Someone ending as a boxer for one of the roomates on the other end of it with his face in the ass area would be so cruel. Especially when college guys maybe are lazy, and not showering so much, and the dirty pants laying around in the room or dirty cloths bag for weeks. Maybe even with cum stains in them.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2018 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Now THAT are some good news, the best I have heared in a while. What a great start into a new story. I love college plots, same as school ones, so this is already a huge boost. Hope to see some nasty scat, maybe involving unaware somehow, but I have to say this is also interesting how Ashley enjoys this it seems. He could even maybe inintentionally transform something, and then not knowing about it, that would be totally cruel. I think you should let the transformed people let them stay though with their awareness, dont let them die (so easily). The part of him begging was pure gold, and how he thought he had a chance to get turned back. And then ending as this stick wet puddle of slime and melting tissue on the bins bottom. Know what would have been even better? Him not dying thete, and him stay aware, and him drying over time. Know when wet meltet tissue dries again, it would totally glue because of the cum to the bins bottom, lol. Imagine how horrible that would have been, him stay there... for week,s months, mabe years. Every time the bin was emptied, the little glued tissue on its bottom would have been stuck. Hot story inc.

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2018 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

*dances with joy* I was secretly hoping you would begin a new mm, and damn, what one. I could already see one new favorite story arising on my list ha. I can see so many great chapters in this story. The Sammy plot was somehow forced into a corner, like you said too yourself, but this is totally open for countless of great scenarios. I have to say I like the idea so much how this boy is aware, compared to Sammy, it adds a different concept to the story. Meaning he is aware, but could transform others and then put them into food or parts, where his roommates are totally unware, that would be hot as fuck. So maybe Ashley is sadistic?? And hes also maybe lacking empathy like a psychopath, meaning he has no way to emphatize with others and dont feel any emtions or realze how horrible it would be for them. I liked the part wehre he was just shurring and the reason was, he was just bored, haha. Cant wait for the next parts. So happy you decidied to write another like this one.

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