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Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2019 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 10

mosty the best of the story so far. just wow. hot hot hot. Hope to see this continued obviously. I would like to see more like this just awesome.

Reviewer: Anonymous--Friend Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16 2019 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 10

I think Ashely's powers could be also used remotely. I mean, I can imagine a situation in which some dude after being a troll to an unknown guy in internet, is then manipulated and transformed before being transported in front of a cute sexy boy, realizing he was the one he was bothering … then, as Ashely started to explains the situation with his wonderful cruelty, the guy then suffers the last part of his humiliation, by realizing his new purpose on life by being turned into something “special” for Ashely’s fun XD…

Reviewer: clubby88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2018 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 10

thebest chapter. incredible hot. pure hot. through and through hot. I read this just today and I loved it. the only thing I would maybe liked more was if you put more cruelness into the tfed guys that they suffer and hate everything. I wold also like to see if they become a body part or object not to die or fade away, they stay but cant say anything. and g through just a nightmare. especialy here being a penis and vomit out Ashely body fluids every day is so damn hot.

Reviewer: redcars Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2018 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 10

I also loved Ashely making this guy who was not even gay his bitch how he whispered and throat fucked him and ugh it was soo so so good. totally the best chapter so far by far far. Ashely is just amazing, how he speaks how he acts, I like him actualy use boys and abuse them in this way and he then doesn't care. would enjoy more chapters in this way.

Reviewer: redcars Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 18 2018 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 10

one of the best you ever wrote. the tf part and him pissing out his mind and how ashley ignored him and was brrr cold... and the vomit cum. and just the masturbate in bed. one of the best you ever wrote. hope you will do more like this in the future. 

Reviewer: adamnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2018 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 10

you got me so much with this chapter, penis tf was just incredible, especially the details of his suffering and surprise. the best parts are always the surprise and then ashely just be shut up or ignoring, or im not finished yet, and him ignoring his cruel work.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2018 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 10

Left you a review on discord. You made my day with this chapter.

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2018 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 10

thanks so much for this new bj chapter and just the tf is just in my taste. I enjoy raunchy plots the most and scat and watersport are my favs. so good chapter, mostly the best so far? I also found the idea of two people joining into one object interesting, ex and bj together as his penis.

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2018 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 10

I read this now before rushing to classes and have to make a run now not getting too late lol... why you doing this to me!! I fingered myself so hard and came two times in a row. How can I now pay attention sitting in my classes? I have to read it again later this afternoon. The idea with the girlfriend and ex and her vanishing and ugh... nothing really I find bad about this. So glad you also used him for the main tf. I wish I could give 20 out of 10 stars for this. It is my new favorite. *kisses* Oh and didn't notice any mistakes your writing are literally flawless. Just one typo I noticed of vurp instead of burp.



Author's Response:

I meant to do vurp (vomit burp)

Reviewer: camehere2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2018 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 10

I didn't like the last chapter so much of the baby plot but this one, seriously it is your best you wrote ever. in every aspect. the only thing I had even liked more was to write out Dan be less of himself and losing it, totally in horror, fright, disgust, in the last part of Ashely jerking off in bed. I don't like parts of where someone changes his mind or enjoys it kinda, the before part though with throwing up and him gaging and all... one of your best you ever wrote.

Reviewer: ILike Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2018 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 10

That was honestly one of the most hot chapters or piece of any story I ever read... you sir are amazing.

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