[Report This]Date: April 03 2019 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
what an amazing chapter. I just love this Ashely guy so much.
[Report This]Date: November 11 2018 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
Was fun reading the new chapter, I didn't like all parts, but it was overall still really good. I love to chill during the weekends and finding out you had written someone new.
[Report This]Date: November 06 2018 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
oh I just realized, where these two alternative endings? I like that idea. one with the reality forgetting arc, and the other with the boy turned back and learning his lesson.
[Report This]Date: November 06 2018 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
I think the best about this chapter is clearly you tried to go back and bring back the style of Ashely being purely cruel and even enjoying it. It was a big lacking in the past chapters, of him speak and lead conversation in this sadistic way. Like in the first chapter with the tissue. I enjoyed this a LOT. Not a fan really of the toddler part though.
[Report This]Date: November 05 2018 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
not sure if it was me mentioning halloween but the new chapter reads kinda like a creepy halloween story and I fuking loved that. especially the ending reminded me kinda of these tales from the crypt tv series where some lecture was alwways at the end. I think there even were some halloween epeisodes too with some brat kids and they have to learn a lesson in life. very enjoyable chapter.
[Report This]Date: November 05 2018 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
Sweet or should I say sore, haha, chapter again!! I honestly didnt expect a new chapter sosoon. Thank you so much for that. I would love frequent updates but I know it is mostly hard work. You put so much passion into your chapter than no one else most on here. You are on my top5 list of authors on here and this story mostly even top3.
Date: November 05 2018 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 9
hot chapter again. keep it up.