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Reviewer: inzdqjwi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2022 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

It's a great story. I liked the small Q&A. Still I think that Ashely's personality is a bit shallow. A human being can be cruel or sadistic and still be an interesting person.

Reviewer: clubby88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2020 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

had some time to read again and oh boy... this story with your last new cammy is so good. Transformation is my favorite love it way more than shrinking actually.

Reviewer: SciFiCrazy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2020 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great series to read. Loving all the transformations and the different point of views from the main the character and his victims.

Reviewer: zbh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2020 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really love this story? Any chance we could see Claire and Ashely run into Maddy again and have Claire use her again? Maybe she realizes Ashely did this to her but he won’t fix her or somehow makes it worse for her so guys will see her as a toilet like girls do? That was my favorite chapter chapter 12!

Reviewer: Anonymous--Friend Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2020 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Uh?... where is chapter 12?... XP

Reviewer: Questathana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2019 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love this! However, your discord link expired.

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2019 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

that part with the god and bugs Iam your god was awesome but everything else too.you are truly a god. of writing.

Reviewer: fatal15 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2019 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

Would love to see some stories from other people’s perspectives.

Reviewer: Anonymous--Friend Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2019 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

"I'm such a nice person..." ... wow! That's phrase, that inner thought of Ashely is simply delightful, an amazing insight of how he sees his playthings.

I’ve to say that the chapter 10 has been one of the best tf stories I’ve read, I usually prefer inanimate transformation scenarios, but this one was a real pleasure. I love how you stablish characters, with their own proper motivations, this makes the transformation process and the realization of their new reality something extraordinary to read, one can actually feels their emotions and their shock and above all, the exquisite cruelty of Ashely’s.

The victim just screams "why??!!"... and the only reply Ashely gives them is “I was bored” or a "Why not? XD" ...

I just love how he treats them, with that joyfull naturalness, mixed with a sense of indifference that actually accentuates his cruelty… I like to think on, what would a person think with the power to turn others into any objects on them? It would be better to consider them as useless individual rather than useful items? I mean, like in chapter 8, one could think that all was some punishment over Tod, but at the end, when Ashely explains his simpler reasons the whole story acquires another tone, a better one XD. or like in chapter 2, when he considered it would be rude to ask Daryl if he minded getting him a hot dog, turning him instead … that was so great… It is like whit the delivery guy, when his transformation was to make something useful of some guy who has none importance as a person to Ashely.

But you show us how that’s is not a mere utilitarianism from his part in which people are just mere potential objects, but actual “playthings” in which their utility is related with the mood of Ashely, which recognize the trauma and pain of his victims and delights in it at the same time it doesn’t implies the great del for him.

As I say it, exquisite XD    

I love clothe transformation, but that implies some idea of having a tf person around for some time, and one of the things I enjoy of Ashely’s tf is the almost immediate dismiss on his victims, turning them into just disposable momentary things (with some exceptions, as the toilet guy X/), so instead of having some guy as his thong (which would be awesome XD), or using some random guys as new insoles for his sneakers, I can imagine him more using a pretty girl in some restaurant as a Q-tip or as toilet paper, just because he needs it, but also, having a really good time by turning some annoying fella into a pimple and enjoy on his pain at the moment he squishes him. Or some dude as a candle during a blackout, a great opportunity to make other “improvements” in some other people XD

 

For his physical appearance, I have imagined him sexy and petite, something like this https://imgur.com/a/6PAzX0e .. However, with black hair, not blonde… for some reason I imagine Sammy being blonde, but not Ashely. However, I imagine Ashely whit a mischievous look in his face  https://imgur.com/a/sg31lkI ….

 

Reviewer: pete445 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 11 2018 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

It is purely remarkable how you structure your chapters so well. So many writers on here just rush their stories and honestly, most are complete garbage. I was always a fan of longer plots and I love Stephen King books, they are actually rather long and have long introductions before the true horror happens. And you write in a similar way and I hope you always will stay this way. The whole intro with the kinda asshole girlfriend and the cinema part was so good and fun to read. It just makes the entire plot better. I honestly enjoy you writing longer chapters and delay the good parts. It adds up to the highlights of the story. And it fits so well of Ashely turning into this sadistic monster who also doesn't care or give a shit. I just love how kind he was just at the party and then enjoying being cruel later than even ignoring what he did and just went on with his teenage life, and the fap in the bed was the highlight. I hope you won't close this story too soon. Please don't. I could easily see it have 20 chapters in one year by now, and honestly, it won't get boring or anything. This story is too good to close it. Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: lumier963 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 18 2018 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

You are a genius at writting!!!! i do love this story so much. Thanks for writting i really cant wait to read more story like this wrriten by you.

 

PD: Sorry for my English :s 

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 02 2018 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

So happy you wrote back, you have no idea! I would honestly love more than anything to see these ideas I talked about as chapters, there are so many ideas to write for hot chapters. I think I asked this before but would you maybe do a story commission for me maybe by time? We could maybe talk via email if you want, how could I reach you? I cant wait for the next chapters honestly.

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2018 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hope you liked my review you never write back ha. But more importantly my ideas for future chapters. Would love to see them used especially the fleshlight and it being used to take a shit into because the dorm toilet is cloaked. But also the other ones too. Hope you're doing well and you have time again soo to write. This story is just the best of this site. Period.



Author's Response:

Sorry, been very busy.  I'm trying to think of a good chapter to write, but been working on other story first cuase been a while.  I'll try to get a chapter out soon as possible but I'm trying to think of a good plot for the chapter.

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2018 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoy the m/m parts the most. naughty tf, I like it, please more like that, really really naughty stuff. I enjoy actually stuff like unaware blowjob and such, I kind of like how this guy suffered though it and the boys had no idea about not using just some doll.

Reviewer: pete445 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2018 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

really great new chapter, the fly idea was great I liked it a lot, especially the contrast between the characters was so well done. this phil guy had such open and big ego like a typical straight jock, I love him, and th eother was totally disgusted and that was a great way to humiliate the transformed student, and ashely just was cruel with a sadist play, I love that. keep on.

Reviewer: zaneofbane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2018 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

Good Story. I would love to see something involving anal insertion. Perhaps transforming someone into a butt plug and forgetting about them over night?

Reviewer: cookieman95 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2018 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

love this story so much. How about a lady turned into a fleshlight for a latter chapter? I always wanted to read that. Kseep up the great work!!!

Reviewer: Anonymous--Friend Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2018 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

One of the best stories I have ever read... I can imagine some guy could be very (un) pleased to be his insole, or Ashely could be interested into smoking some dude XP... anyway, you have better ideas than me and I cannot wait to see more cruel but really creative transformations from Ashely XD

Reviewer: pete445 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2018 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

wha a great new story, loved every bit of it, the ending so good. how the boy is so mean and cruel and dont give a fuck, awesome!! and how hes more like not even interested and forgot the random boys name in the end, him just became a cum stain on the bin bottom. maybe one of the roommates sees it a week later or so and makes a joke about it.

Reviewer: adamnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2018 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

I also liked the first chapter so much because Ashely just turned this guy out of being bored into the tissue, I love how cruel he seems to have become with his power. The ending with the monologue was such a turn on Ashely let out a relived sigh, "I definitely needed that." Not even bothering cleaning up, Ashely grabbed some clothes and headed for the shower. He would take out the garbage later. Ashely had already left his room, completely forgetting all about what's his name... Why? Because he just totally ignored him at this point and casually left the room, already forgot the boys name, which is so hot. And how you used the "take out the garbage", thats what he was, just some dirty smelly slimy garbage stuck to the garbage bin. The best is all people around cant hear the transformed objects at all. Hope to see more like this. Amazing new story!!

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