Date: April 06 2018 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Taking a Fall
This story is really something, sad to see it fall off the radar, it will always be a classic in my book.
You write for yourselves as much as us, i think if you stuck with your own plan you would have stayed interested.
Date: March 17 2018 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Taking a Fall
Hopefully Hannah keeps her underfoot all day and night! Even when she goes to bed she stuffs her in a sock she’s wearing so Erin can never escape her feet! All the while Erin is wondering why this happened to her and why everyone wants her underfoot
Date: March 17 2018 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Deal
Love this story! Just something about it, youre writing style just grabs the reader.
This freaking bus, lol, everyone is twisted on it.
Yeah, was kind of hoping the same, that Keri would have just got up and left with her little occupant but now that Hannah is going to get another crack at her AND Keri gets to take her when she wants too, I cant wait!
I think a direction this story may go, since poor Abbey lost out on the object of her affection and who was longing for her before anyone else ever was, snatches her prized possession at a later date. Maybe as an ending ;)
Whatever happens, I hope Erin doesnt ever begin to enjoy what is happening to her, just sucks all the fun out of it! IMO
Date: March 16 2018 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Deal
Well, I love where this is going. Kids are generally crueller than adults, so now that Hannah is getting her, and her mother approves, it looks like poor Erin is going to be having a very hard, and hopefully humiliating time.
Date: March 07 2018 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Unaware Jealousy
Oh damn, I love them all! Im sure it will be great whomever gets to keep Erin.
Love this story! The action and discrptions is great as is the personality of each girl that wants Erin.
Date: March 03 2018 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 3 - An Artist and a Dancer
Aw i thought that the amount of people who said Hannah would’ve guaranteed that Erin would be going home with her /:
The bus ride section isn't over just yet. Have faith!
Date: March 02 2018 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 3 - An Artist and a Dancer
Yes, I changed my mind, Abbey can have her! LOL
With Hannah it would be foot fun but Abbey is older and can do sooo much more *weg*
Or, maybe they strike up a friendship and share her. Best of both worlds.
Loving this story!
Date: March 02 2018 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 3 - An Artist and a Dancer
Phenomenal first few chapters! Rarely am I left really begging for another! Keep up the great work! I also agree with a previous reply, I don't see how a mothers work heels couldn't come into play ;). Rooting for Hannah and can't for what's to come!