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Reviewer: elza3imza3im Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2018 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 01 A Snack Good Enough to Eat

i love it

 

Reviewer: Gogblo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 16 2018 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 03 Down the Toilet

incredible plot, wished the mother had also taken a shit, that would have been pure horror.

Reviewer: Dankmeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2018 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 01 A Snack Good Enough to Eat

Was meant to review this last week but I never had the chance to log in. This is a really good story.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I appreciate it. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks. I appreciate it. :)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: February 25 2018 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 08 Closing & Extras

Cool story. Loved Susan. Having Phil shrink himself was cool. He deserves to be small. What an idiot.

Author's Response:

I was orginally going to have Susan crush Phil with her high heel, and afterwards she'd report it to the police as an "accident" pinning the blame all on her husband and collecting his life insurance. The thought of making the entitled dirtbag a young girl's tiny slave was too good to pass up, so I ended killing Tom off instead in order to keep things interesting.

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