Date: July 22 2018 5:18 AM Title: Alyssa's Revenge Pt.2
Loved that Allysa was doing research about shrinking people. That's kind of a turn on. Loved that her Mother cleaned the house and signed everything over to her. The crushing her in her hand was my favorite. The anal and shoe crush were both Awesome. A very well deserved and fun chapter. Really loved it. Your writing style is excellent.
Date: June 18 2018 11:02 PM Title: Alyssa's Revenge Pt.1
Wow, really loved Allysa torturing and crushing bobby. He deserved it. This was fantastic. Loved the revenge. It's great to see her get this well deserved gift. Marvelous chapter.
Thanks, expect more in the next chapter.
Date: April 22 2018 5:31 AM Title: Greg - the date giver
Greg is going to feel that in the morning. Makes me wonder what's going to happen next. It's going to be hard for him to get around with that bad leg.
Also love what happened with Jamie's Boss. A fitting Death.
Thanks, hope you keep enjoying it all. I actually re wrote the bosses death about 4 times, each time it got longer and longer. I had to stop myself other wise it would of never ended.
Date: April 21 2018 2:19 AM Title: Push it to the limit
The crush stuff really does it for me.
I intend to try and do more crush stuff but I feel a bit limited in this story. I like finding ways to still slip some in though. When this is all done my next planned stories will be alot more crush involved.
Date: April 21 2018 2:06 AM Title: Greg - the date giver
An exciting and fun chapter. I greatly enjoyed the boss getting told what a scumbag he is. Then the boss's running to the Giantess Jenna for help. Love her facial expression before stepping on him. It was a detailed and deserved crush. I also enjoyed her cleaning her shoes and mess with a tissue. I thought when she got to Jamie she might mention the bug she crushed just to give Jamie another clue and to further enhance the crush story.
His exploring Goddess Jamie's body and loving her nipple was Awesome. Great details and a lot of fun.
I like the addition of Alyssa. I will be interested in how she figures in.
Greatly enjoying your story. Any crushing that a lady does is always appreciated.
Thanks, its good to hear you are enjoying it so far. I always enjoy giving extra detail here and there.
Date: April 09 2018 2:38 AM Title: Office work stinks
It appears as though Greg is getting rid of of compition. Or maybe he thinks "Hey, I may be perverted but not like that guy." That's why I think the character has stuck with pleasuring himself with footware and not Jamie's actual foot. Well, that and it's safer.
Looking forward to the next installment.
Date: April 07 2018 11:10 PM Title: Office work stinks
An incredibly fun and cool chapter. Loved his experience in her shoe. The smells, stench and sweat were all a wonderful experience. You describe it so well. It makes me feel like I am there.
Shrinking the boss is excellent. He deserves to be small. I can hardly wait until you describe his fate. I wonder if Jenna will notice him. I hope he runs to her pleading for help. I hope Jenna hates bugs and thinks the only good insect is a crushed insect. It would make my day.
Date: March 25 2018 6:58 PM Title: A sticky lunch
I think you should do what you want. It brings happiness and makes you write better. I'd like to see Jamie find him.
Thank you very much, its good to hear that. In my overall plan I see Jamie eventually finding Greg.
Date: March 24 2018 2:19 PM Title: A sticky lunch
I was afraid this story was never going to get a new chapter. Good thing I was wrong. For me, there's no such thing as too much detail. More detail equals more mental visualization. I'm curious to read what happens between Greg and Alyssa.
Sometime it takes me a while to finish a chapter, meanwhile other time i will have a few in reserve. Thanks for the feedback and as for Alyssa, I can see her being around sometimes.
Date: March 17 2018 3:50 PM Title: Mall Mischief
Nice chapter. I wonder if Greh is going to end up in the womb, and if the girl he is in going to have sex with someone before he gets out.
Unfortuantly that probably wont happen in this story. But i have a huge list for other shorter stories when im done.