Date: March 17 2018 3:50 PM Title: Mall Mischief
Nice chapter. I wonder if Greh is going to end up in the womb, and if the girl he is in going to have sex with someone before he gets out.
Unfortuantly that probably wont happen in this story. But i have a huge list for other shorter stories when im done.
Date: March 13 2018 12:16 PM Title: What doesnt kill you ...
A game changer indeed. It will also get him in trouble. Jamie saw him once. Will she see him again and figure it out? What happens if his device gets stepped on by Jamie? Will he be trapped at that size?
Ooh so many juicy questions to be answered...in time.
Date: March 12 2018 10:58 PM Title: What doesnt kill you ...
I'm not digging the Ellie character, but Jamie is fantastic! I love her!
I can't wait for her to be the source of Greg's arousal in the future. If I was in his shoes I don't think Ellie would have been that fun to be trapped with. Jamie is a goddesss though. I just hope she is more than just feet.
The new active camo suit should really come in handy. Sometimes I try to imagine myself sneaking into a hot milf's house and just admire the beauty without having to worry about being seen.
Then again, I probably wouldn't mind being seen by Jamie. I think she might have a few fun ideas in mind. (Such as the one in my previous review.)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
I am slowly working my way to Jamie, its just i keep having ideas for Ellie lol. But im sure eventually Greg will have LOTS of fun with her.
Date: March 09 2018 6:27 AM Title: Gregs Watch
Kinda a shame he went aggressive. It would have been cool for him to spend some time as toejam.
Maybe at some point he could get trapped in the treads of the girl's shoe while she plays.
This is definitly happening in the future.
Date: March 07 2018 11:00 AM Title: Gregs Watch
great job! never feel like you have to skip any detail, even if you think your readers won't like your fantasy. i wrote about 2 chapters once here and deleted them thinking it was too much :(
hope you keep the unaware stuff in your story forever! i like the detail in how the protagonist interacts and uses his senses on objects. you'd be good at body exploration, mouth encounters and bare feet chapters.
I don't know about you but i really like very oblivious giantesses, like they still dont recognise a person even if they hold the tiny to their eye, they still see a weird bug. what are your thoughts on this? hope you keep ellie around for a fair while longer
Thanks! I feel that if you should write what you would want in a story and never take criticisms to heart. There will be more unaware and body exploration in the future but I fell that eventually he will be found, Greg can't keep getting into these worse and worse spots without eventually slipping up.
Date: March 06 2018 3:55 AM Title: Getting to know the neighbours
A very exciting chapter. Having Jamie order Ellie to squash that bug was cool and realistic. Loved that scene. I could feel his horror as he ran for his life. Having Jamie discover his hook and string is a fascinating twist. It reminds me of the land of the giants show. Any sane man would never go over to their house again. But we know that men are stupid.
Really enjoying your story,
Thanks! Good to hear you are liking it so far. And yeah any sane person definitely wouldn't go back, good for us it seems Greg is getting crazier the longer this goes on :-).
Date: March 05 2018 3:34 AM Title: Getting to know the neighbours
I can't wait for Jamie to find Greg and keep him as her little prisoner.
I think Greg might enjoy being held hostage by Jamie. I'm hoping Jamie is one of those kinky giantesses.
Will there be other stuff than feet? I'm a big fan of the front of the panties and I think it might be cool to see Jamie trap Greg in her panties one day and take him to work with her.
Anyway, I love the start of this story.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks. There will be more ' situtations ' Greg gets into, worry not. Good things come to all who wait, especially Greg.
Date: March 04 2018 7:28 AM Title: Getting to know the neighbours
I like where the story is going. Nice touch on the dreams that the character is having. I'd think if someone could change size there would be some messed up dreams. I'd like to see some more unaware stuff, but I'm also looking forward to the latest installment.
Thanks! I'm also liking the dreams, gives a good idea where Gregs head is at. And dont worry, there will be more unaware in the future.