Date: July 30 2018 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
Another great chapter, I love the unaware interactions with Noreen. Id love to see a tie along chapter from Chris's POV!
Author's Response: The thought had crossed my mind, but I’m trying to move the story along and backtracking would only slow me down. However, I think I can appease you; I’ve got another unaware interaction with Noreen up my sleeve. 😉. Thanks for reading and for the review!
Date: July 29 2018 4:01 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
Hmm. Realistic. But also balanced and playful.
Let's see. Noreen will probably have several major questions for both Shannon and Chris. She will ask Shannon about Chris's condition, what she does to Chris and how to take care of him. She could ask Chris about how Chris ended up under her foot and he can detail his journey.
I think Noreen could go full nurse mode and tend to Chris's health since Noreen is a big fan of being healthy.
Shannon will assure Noreen that everything is fine and want to take back Chris asap. But also want Noreen to keep the secret safe.
Chris, like you said will want to be kept in safe hands and might even think of sticking with Noreen since Noreen doesn't seem as aggressive as Shannon.
I can see Noreen being curious about the whole situation which includes the shrinking, size of Chris, who else knows and so on. Then they soon decide that she needs to help Shannon to keep Chris safe. Then after that, Noreen think of ways to deal with Chris, perhaps playful and try to make it fun.
But yes, I Think a realistic approach would be some form of shock, but also questioning both of them to know the scooop of what's going on. Then she will start to think of the "fun" aspects for Chris.
I don't see Noreen as a mean type, and yes I guess she could be playful. I would like a naughty vibe from her, but I doubt you would include that since Shannon acts the same way. Perhaps, Chris and Noreen needs to spend time together as friends and then they can find some fun things to do later.
I do like the thought of Noreen trying to find a guy so I do hope she gets somewhat sexual with Chris.
Lots of possibilities!
Author's Response: Most of what you’re saying is aligns with what I’m thinking, too. The problem is in the execution—finding the right balance. There’s a lot I have planned for the next couple of in story days and not a lot of extra time. Spoiler: Chris will start growing back soon. Thank you so much for your thoughts and feedback!
Author's Response: Most of what you’re saying is aligns with what I’m thinking, too. The problem is in the execution—finding the right balance. There’s a lot I have planned for the next couple of in story days and not a lot of extra time. Spoiler: Chris will start growing back soon. Thank you so much for your thoughts and feedback!
Date: July 28 2018 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
Aww, I was hoping for more unaware.
Author's Response: Don’t worry, still plenty more of that come, I guarantee it! 🤗
[Report This]Date: July 28 2018 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
Yes! Noreen finds Chris! I'm so excited!
I understand you are not sure where to go with this. Perhaps, I can help with some ideas.
-Noreen realizes that Chris felt nice on her foot and decides to keep him to play with.
-Chris explains his side of the story feeling embarrassed and Noreen can't help but feel horny thinking of what Chris went through.
-Noreen decides to hang on to Chris and also tells Shannon that she will keep her secret as long Noreen gets some time with Chris.
-Noreen realizes that she never really wanted a man, but instead wanted some pleasure which Chris can provide.
-Shannon explains Chris's shrinking and how she lost him during their meeting outside. She is reluctant to tell Noreen about what she does to Chris, but Noreen brings up some naughty ideas which allows Shannon to openly share her methods.
-Shannon tells Noreen that she will take Chris off her hands, but Noreen seems excited and decides to hold on to Chris and let Shannon relax.
-Both Noreen and Shannon talk about what to do with Chris, while Chris is shaking his head "no" at each idea they come up with while the ladies smile in agreement.
Yeah, most of these ideas are similar and I might come up with more. I just want to see Noreen play with Chris.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I will definitely take your suggestions under advisement. My take on Noreen is that although she and Shannon are good friends, Noreen isn’t mean by any sense, so I don’t think she would knowingly torture Chris. It is possible that if she can understand the situation, however, she might be a bit playful. I want her reaction to Chris’s predicament to be realistic, I mean how would a real person react to seeing someone tiny, something that never happens in real life. Their reaction would probably be a mixture of disbelief and confusion, possibly wanting to know more about how it happened. You also look at things from Chris’s perspective: Now that the secret’s out, and since Shannon has put him through Quite a bit, he probably admit several things and hide others about what Shannon’s done to him, and beg Noreen to keep him safe until he gets big again. I want this next chapter to be as realistic as possible as far as how each character would most likely react: Noreen’s disbelief, Chris’s anxiety about her intentions and his eagerness to be kept out of danger, and Shannon’s fears about Chris being discovered. I think the key will be finding the right balance of caring and playfulness, if it’s possible.
[Report This]Date: July 20 2018 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Chris! Why did you leave her vagina?! First, its sexy. Second, it's your best method of getting Noreen's attention and he blew it. Hopefully, this is just a way of having Shannon leave before Noreen finds Chris. If Noreen found Chris, she probably would have given him back to Shannon and we know we can't have that anytime soon.
Noreen is super sexy. Love how she toys with Chris and her body seems to act on its own, just playing with him. It's like Noreen said "ok pussy, enjoy!" and she feeds Chris to it.
So it seems that Noreen has stepped on Chris. Now Chris is super sticky, so he could possibly be stuck under her foot as she walks back to Shannon. Or Chris is stuck to her bath mat, and Noreen returns for her shower and disrobes over him, her panties falling in him and he gets stuck to it. Then afterward, she puts it on with Chris inside. (Bit of a stretch, right?)
These unaware scenes are good, but I'm absolutely excited about Noreen finding Chris. You do a great job writing the dialogue and interactions between characters, especially Shannon and Chris, and I would love to see some of that with Noreen and Chris.
Wow, I'm impressed by Shannon's creativity to create a distraction while she looks. Asking for some medication, haha! Then Chris caused the ultimate distraction, by escaping. I love how Noreen loves Chris inside her and gets upset when Chris starts escaping. So comical, yet so sexy.
Noreen works out pretty much every part of her body, doesn't she? Well, maybe her vaginal muscles need a workout too, and Chris provides the best gym equipment for that workout.
Noreen has easily become the best part of this story, even better than the first girl whom I have forgotten the name since she was there for 1 chapter and then a dream. Well, I'm glad Noreen has introduced to this story. She is sexy and fit and her ambition to get things done makes me excited. I am anxious for her to discover Chris and I can only what she will do to him.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Along with yours, I have received very positive feedback on the Noreen chapters; I’m so glad many people liked it! I had outlined how this whole scenario with Noreen would end, but all the feedback is at least making me reconsider some things. If Noreen does find Chris, it’s going to be quite be awkward situation, and Shannon will have a lot of explaining to do. As always, thanks for your feedback!
Date: July 20 2018 3:03 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
The noreen section is so good its definitely worth shannon failing in finding the protagonist at noreens house for a while and getting a few more types of unaware chapters out of it!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it; thanks for reading and your feedback. And trust me, there’s a lot more unaware stuff to come!
[Report This]Date: July 16 2018 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 19
Incredible story so far and this chapter brings it to a whole new level. Cant wait for the next!
Author's Response: I’m glad to hear you liked it; I’ve received very positive feedback from this chapter. There are a few more “unique” scenarios that I’d like to include in this and future stories. Thanks for reading!
Date: July 13 2018 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
Nice chapter. Hope Chris ended up inside Noreen's Womb, especially if he starts to grow back inside her womb (I know it's not a true unbirth, but I really do love unbirth stories especially with male to female unbirth and ones with people trapped inside wombs), If he does grow back inside her womb, I hope for several funny moments trying to get him out with him being to big by then, maybe even have to find a way to shrink him again, and get to continue the story.
Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback. I’ll take your suggestion under consideration.
[Report This]Date: July 13 2018 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
That was ridiculously sexy!
I loved the yoga parts. You do a great job at describing those yoga positions, and I could easily see Noreen performing them. It made Chris's situation much more clear.
Of course, we got a cliffhanger this time. Noreen opens her legs wide and Chris falls inside! Then Noreen felt herself up and couldn't find him! Chris must be trapped deep inside her, those muscles holding him in place, preventing him from moving, and therefore, Noreen doesn't feel him. That's hot.
Even after just 2 chapters, I love Noreen much more than Shannon. Her fitness program makes me envy how Chris is enduring all this.
Please tell me that Shannon doesn't find Chris for long. Or at least Noreen gets to have lots of fun before Shannon arrives. Or even better, Noreen hides Chris when Shannon arrives!
I like how you said Noreen won't take too kindly about finding Chris in her panties. Hmm. Maybe she will punish him by keeping him in there.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I’ve been wanting to do a chapter like this in a story for a long time, and when I chose to bring Noreen into the story, it provided the perfect opportunity. I tried to make it as sexy and stimulating as possible, with enough detail to describe the exact situation so as not to just nonchalantly skim over it. I have several more scenarios that I’ve been wanting to include and these will require characters other than just Shannon as well, meaning that Noreen may not be the only other person Chris has a run in with, but that’s all I’ll say for now. I hope the next couple of chapters will also be to your liking.
Date: July 05 2018 10:50 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
I hope you didn't skip my review because the review above mine got a reply.
Author's Response: Oh no, definitely wouldn’t skip yours. Just had to think about my reply. Short and sweet.
Date: July 05 2018 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
Nice chapter. I'm hoping that Chris has a while before growing back, and after spending some time with Unaware Noreen, ends up with someone else unaware, before Shannon can find him.
Author's Response: There’s still going to be some time with Chris in his shrunken state, along with some fun as he starts to grow back to normal!
Date: July 04 2018 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 18
This was an awesome chapter I can’t wait to see the next.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Stay tuned for more.
[Report This]Date: July 04 2018 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
Best chapter yet! I love it!
Thank you for uploading this chapter, it's been a while since any of my favorite authors posted something lately so I'm glad you filled in that gap.
This is no ordinary chapter, it was long and fruitful. It felt as if I was reading a story within another story. I loved the effort you put into this chapter, not just the length, but also the references.
Thank you for the Sue Ann dream! Just the mention of Sue Ann would make this chapter already on of my favorites. I would have been happy with that alone, but then you exceeeded my expectations!
Noreen just made me fall in love! A smoking hot fit woman who is mature enough to respect her body and in her 30's meaning that her body is completely full. Love the mention of wide hips, my favorite trait of a woman. I love the look of wide hips on fit woman. It stands out and is attractive to me.
I love the dream sequence, from Sue Ann to Shannon to Noreen. I'm glad it ended with the panties of Noreen, what a goddess! Noreen also has wide hips so Chris will easily slide in between her legs to settle by her crotch.
I still don't know how it's possible for Chris to slide into Noreen's tight spandex and then into her panties, but I won't complain because it's the sexiest position to be in.
Then she mentioned that she was going to finish her run and afterward, do some yoga? Amazing! I hope Chris remains trapped in the crotch of her panties for her entire workout or hopefully the rest of the day. Imagine Noreen doing some splits with her crotch swallowing up Chris.
I have no idea why Chris is panicking. Noreen is sexy! Also she babysat Chris before so it's not like she is a complete stranger. Chris was in fear of Noreen finding him like this, but I am in fact excited! I want Noreen to discover him eventually and then have naughty thoughts about treating Chris similarly to Shannon, although I prefer Noreen to be that horny woman who is eager to find a man so she decides to use Chris for some pleasure. The only thing missing is for Noreen to tied up Chris to the front of her panties so he faces her pussy and then go about her workout and the rest of the day with Chris trapped inside.
I wish I was in Chris's position so bad! I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for your loyal readership....and your review. I think you’ll be pleasantly surprised with the next chapter. I’ll post it as soon as I can!
[Report This]Date: May 21 2018 6:50 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
At first I was disappointed that Sue Ann would not be taking care of Chris as she was beautifully decscribed in the early chapters. As these chapters go on, however, I find myself more enticed with Shannon and her desires to the point that I want to be in Chris' shoes.
Fantastic story, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review: I hope you stay tuned and enjoy what’s to come. I do have plans for Sue Ann later in the story, but I’m still hashing out the details. If you have anything you’d like to see, don’t hesitate to ask. Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review: I hope you stay tuned and enjoy what’s to come. I do have plans for Sue Ann later in the story, but I’m still hashing out the details. If you have anything you’d like to see, don’t hesitate to ask. Thanks for reading!
Date: May 09 2018 1:37 AM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
Thank for such an awesome response to my review!
I'm really excited for what you have planned out. I hope those chapters come soon.
I also like how you introduced Rachel's mother. I'm actually interested in her too. In fact, I think I might like Rachel's mother even better than Shannon or Rachel. (Will Rachel's mother have a slim/fit figure?)
I'm hoping she is one of those single moms who miss their husband and will crave Chris once she sees him. If Sue Ann doesn't show up soon, hopefully Rachel's mother does. That could be fun.
Hey, now I got someone else to root for. Back to following this story, please don't jinx it. Lol.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: You’re very welcome! I do appreciate and always look forward to your reviews.
[Report This]Date: May 08 2018 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 15
I didn't review the last chapter becuase I just wasn't into that kind of content. I know other readers may enjoy it, buts it not exactly my cup of tea. It's good to have some variety, so I don't mind. Better than me just complaining about it. Lol.
This chapter was more fun to read. The creativeness about the car ride and where Shannon got the shrinking stuff. That was good.
Isn't this the second time Shannon is going to eat him? At this point it seems kinda predictable that she won't eat him. Especially since you used the same cliffhanger before.
Also, it's been so long since we saw Sue Ann. She was there in the first chapter and that was the best part of this story and I keep scratching my head, wondering why won't you bring her back into the story. Then in your response to another review, you mentioned her being a combo of Star Hughes and Shailene Woodly. I had no idea who Star Hughes was, but wow, she is georgeous. Now I'm very anxious for Sue Ann to make an appearance soon.
Well, I'm not sure if I'm going to keep reviewing this story without Sue Ann, becuase these last few chapters seem very repetitive. If it was Sue Ann doing these sexy things on repeat, I probably wouldn't mind, but I think personally I'm getting a little tired of Shannon, especially when my favorite giantess hasn't even shown up to play with Chris lately.
Author's Response: I wanted this story to have a little bit of everything, something for everybody to enjoy. This does mean that there may be some chapters that some prefer to others, but that’s just how it is. While I do like the end of my chapters to have some kind of cliffhanger, sometimes the chapters start getting a bit long, so it’s hard to find just the right place to end them. I will say that this is the part of the story that will be the hardest for me to write: Shannon and Chris both want to keep his shrinking a secret, so neither is motivated to seek out unwanted attention. For that reason, I want the next several chapters to go through the next days somewhat quickly. As you can tell by the reviews, many people want Sue Ann back, along with other characters; I’ve been reluctant to give away too many details, but if it will increase readership, I’ll give you a slight preview.
SPOILER ALERT: I said in the beginning of the story that initially Sue Ann was supposed to watch Chris this week, but she had to cancel. The reason was hinted at in that same chapter: Sue Ann runs several side businesses and one of them came into conflict with watching Chris, she will show up later in the week once her business is concluded, along with Rachel AND her mother (for those who like the 40yr old giantess type). This is why I want to get through the next couple of days quickly, those are going to be the really exciting parts. I want to give as much time with each character as possible while still staying true to the heart of the story. For now, I thank you immensely for your feedback and urge you to keep reading. Hopefully, you’ll have a positive experience in the end!
Date: May 01 2018 5:22 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
for some reason i think of sue ann as the enormous brested women and think shannon is the low key thick kinda girl. im starting to see shannon as the kind of type of women that ks trying to gain chris trust just so she can stuff him in her pussy. Man i wish this whould happen in real life. oh well a person can dream.
Author's Response: If it helps, picture Sue Ann as someone who has natural beauty, but accentuates it slightly. Remember, Sue Ann is not much taller than Shannon and somewhat slim. I don’t really picture her as some big-breasted, perky supermodel; she’s more of a 30 yr old mix between Star Hughes and Shailene Woodley. Shannon, on the other hand, is more analogous to a plus-size model, but carries more of her weight in her breasts and butt rather than her stomach. If you reread some of the chapters carefully, you’ll start getting an idea of Shannon’s motives, but that’s all I’ll say for now. As for wishing it would happen in real life, don’t we all!
Date: May 01 2018 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 14
very sexy chapter! is it foolish for me to wish shannon will get him off using her phat ass and farts? a weirdo can dream.
Author's Response: While I won’t confirm or deny anything yet, I CAN guarantee that you will see more of Shannon’s giant, farting ass. I downplayed that part of her persona to help move the story along a bit, but you will definitely see more of it as the story progresses. Actually, you HAVE inspired me for an upcoming chapter, so check back for more!
[Report This]Date: April 16 2018 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
I think I just realized how much I miss Sue Ann. Even though it was a dream, it was the best part of this chapter for me. I love her caring, playful, yet dominant attitude toward Chris. I hope this dream becomes a reality. Thanks for including it.
I think I like evil Shannon. The arguements about what Shannon could or could not do was getting a bit repetitive. So, it's nice that Shannon finally is making a stand and is punishing Chris.
Also, good choice by trapping him in the back of her panties. I always thought of Shannon as the ass woman and love to see her use it against Chris. For Sue Ann, I see her as a pussy expert, probably keeping Chris in the front of her panties while Shannon keeps Chris in the back.
This chapter was great. Love the Sue Ann tease and how Shannon is retaking control.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Part of this chapter is thanks in part to my readers who wanted to see Sue Ann, so I thought what a perfect way to tease everyone, with a dream sequence! There is a reason Sue Ann isn’t there in reality, so all will be revealed in time. I know sometimes the arguments can get long-winded, but that’s how real arguments go. Just wanted to remind everyone about Shannon’s personality and why Chris hated Shannon in the first place!
Date: April 13 2018 1:53 PM Title: Part I—Chapter 1
I love this story so much that i come back here everyday to see if you added another chapter. you are one of the best writers on here and I thank you for that.
Its weird i never realy liked vore but reading this story is starting to make me like it.
I also wanted to ask coud youpossibly add some sex stuff with chris and rachel.
once agin I love your storys and i urge you to keep writing because you are one of the best writers on this site and dont let anyone tell you diffrentily.
Author's Response: Normally, I will try to add one chapter per week and will tell everyone ahead of time about any breaks I take. I fully intended to finish this story, one chapter at a time, as I hate unfinished stories on this site. I will say that you will see Rachel and Sue Ann again, but no details yet. I thank you for your praise and loyal readership. Keep checking back for more!