Just catching up on this one, good so far.  Hoping there is a happy ending for Chris (with Rachel!).  Kind of expecting he will be shrunk, and tortured by Shannon if thats the case tell me now and I will STOP READING.  Evidently every writer on this site has the villian get away scott free while the guy who's a decent person is either punished or killed and if thats how this stroy is ending I would prefer to be my time in more productive avenues.

Maybe Rachel could find him and the antidote, have Chris wig out a bit (not sure it's and antidote) Rachel tests it, she cures him, Shannon and Ray get their just deserts while Rachel starts to grow and devolp much faster and further then she should...

Good story so far, thank you.

Just wanted to thank you for all your work in building an actual story, with such wonderful cast of characters. I must say you are very talented, knowing how to use the fetish parts without losing sight of the development of your characters and the plot. Once again, thank you. Hoping to see Rachel and cia. strugling to protect and even interact with a very tiny Chris in a giantess world XDD. 

Yes! I love how this chapter ended up! I had my doubts that Shannon might shrink him, but after reading about Ray’s story, I thought they both had a deep connection.

Turns out, only Ray was the one who loved Shannon that much. Shannon just wants to use Ray for the formula. I don’t mind if Shannon keeps Ray while another sexy giantess keeps Chris. I was never a big fan of the Shannon and Chris relationship, but I love this on with Ray.

Ray loves her so it won’t be so bad for him, and the way he struggles is so much more entertaining than Chris in Shannon’s hands. Chris gives up too easily, but whenever he is around the other giantesses, he provides more effort and I think Chris just likes the other women more. (Or maybe that’s just me.)

I don’t blame you for taking a month for this masterpiece of a chapter. It almost doubled your word count, but it was well worth it. The chapter was so fleshed out and you included so many details.

Now that Ray is taken care of, the focus will be back on Chris. The question would be who finds Chris first? If it’s Shannon, well, the story would probably end right there with 2 sex slaves for her. If it’s Rachel, she will hide Chris but probably nothing sexual happens much between them. I think she will friend zone him. For Mrs. Carson, I think she is the best option because eventually she would show Chris to Rachel, but not right away since Mrs. Carson May have a few questions and things she wants to explore. ;) I think some unaware pleasure leading her to find him will make her believe he is a naughty boy. I could go on and on from here, but not today. Haha.

Anyway, I love this chapter and I can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response: I’m glad you enjoyed it. I knew exactly what I wanted to have happen in this chapter, but it took me a while to get all the details and dialogue just how I wanted. Describing Ray’s backstory was especially important; if I had the entire story to do over again, this is probably how I would have introduced all the characters, that way you get a look at both their psychological and physiological profiles. The dialogue between Shannon and Ray is what took the longest: I wanted their conversations to be intimate and believable, and for it to flow naturally. Now that Shannon’s planning her escape, Chris has no idea how much trouble he’s really in.

Shannon wants to keep Chris tiny forever apparently, and this new Ray dude, Shannon will probably use Chris while she have some fun with Ray I can only imagine, don't know if she'll be able to accomplish her plan, but if she do well Chris will have to accept his fate once and for all.

Wow, I never realized that so many chapters actually occurred in one day. It made me realize how fast things happen in your story.

It’s also crazy that Chris’s parents will return Saturday as while that seems very close, I’m sure there will be plenty of chapters until then.

I like the increased drama this chapter. The stakes have dramatically increased. Janet knows about Shannon, Sue Ann is already into her, and now Chris’s mom is onto Shannon.

If I was Shannon, I would admit that I lost track of Chris, or he ran away and didn’t want to get blamed for it. Maybe someone will believe her, but it’s better than saying nothing and continue this “sick” story. Lol.

I also like how Rachel knows about her mother knowing about Chris’s situation. I think it would be great for her to tell her mom about her dreams and connect it to the dog sniffing their feet. While Rachel may not put the pieces together, I believe Mrs. Carson is smart enough to think of it, even if she won’t believe it right away.

Also, let’s not forget Chris is still stuck in that drain in the laundry room. I expect Janet to return there soon, perhaps making sure Rachel got the clothes or something.

In addition, Shannon mentioned Chris’s position would wear off soon. I mentioned this countless times, and I know only a few days have passed, but I still think Chris is supposed to grow slowly and I think a little growth spurt is due soon. Maybe he grows and pops out of the drain, I’m not sure. Would love to see him reach an inch soon so he is at least able to be seen by the giantesses.

The whole “shrink and keep someone forever” is one of the sexiest themes there is on giantess world and I love how you included it. While I would rather have another giantess say it, it fits Shannon’s character completely.

Shannon’s plan involves keeping Chris forever, but that includes finding him. Chris doesn’t want to be with Shannon and no one wants to let Shannon be with Chris. So I have no idea how Chris winds up back with Shannon, and I hope it’s not anytime soon. Haha.

I reread my suggestion from a past review about a 2 foot tall Chris being used by Mrs. Carson and the crazy part was that that review was in August. Crazy how time flies. Hopefully Chris grows a little in no time as well.

I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: 1) Yes, I didn’t realize either how many chapters occur on the same day. The first 11 chapters take place entirely on the first day! We are getting through the week, but so much happens on a day to day basis. There are still a few more chapters to go, but trust me, we are approaching the end.
2) It true that this chapter was more about plot development and less about “encounters”, but it’s a rather important one. I needed this chapter to focus on the other characters instead of Chris, especially getting back to what Shannon’s been up to. As more people suspect her, Shannon becomes more desperate, and things are starting to unravel.
3) I’m actually exploring more and more how Rachel reacts as events unfold. I think she may play an even bigger part than initially anticipated.
4) The potion will start to wear off again, and both Chris and Shannon know it, which is obviously why she needs another supply. She’s doesn’t want to tell anyone about Chris predicament, and has only told “Ray” the bare minimum. I will say that the “shrink and keep him forever” theme was always going to be my endgame. Will it work?
Lastly, it has been a long time since I started the story, and there are several tiny details I seeded into certain chapters. Those details will start to come to light in the next few chapters, leading up to the big conclusion, but we’ve still got a ways to go!

Yes! Another chapter! I love how Chris had a little memory loss as the dildo rammed him up Mrs. Carson’s vagina. It was funny to see him believe it was Noreen’s body and her bathroom. Then the memories flooded back in and he remember Janet and her intimate experiences with him.

I think Chris is still too small for Janet to feel him. Then again, I don’t know how sensitive a vagina is, but 1/8 of an inch is pretty small and once again, he has been this size for way too long now. Anxious for some growth soon. At least a little bit.

A drain pipe! Man, you scared me when you had Chris sent down there. I thought he would be transported out of the house and into Shannon’s hands. Glad he stayed in the house.

Lol, gotta love the Rachel dream. She even herd squeaking while doing laundry and didn’t even think of Chris? I thought she would and maybe shrug it off.

Well, I love this chapter and I can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Believe it or not, there is so much to your review, that I want to address each part individually:

You and several readers wanted another shower scene, so I needed to do some brainstorming on how to make it unique, rather than just a rehash of the prior scene. I chose to focus on the differences between mother and daughter for inspiration: Janet’s maturity allowed for a bit more erotic experience, as opposed to Rachel, who is much more innocent. Also, the dream sequence with Noreen allowed for bringing that scene to reality, so I thought it was a perfect callback.

I’ll fully admit that I took some artistic license with how sensitive a woman’s vagina is, but I’m a big fan of a tiny person being trapped inside a woman while she orgasms. And I also thought that Chris being squirted out of Janet made for a funny scene.

I felt the drain was the only way that scene could end. But the issue was how could Chris go down the drain, and me have a story go where I want to go. For reasons I can’t spoil yet, Chris needed to stay in the Carson home, and a drain pipe under the laundry room was my compromise. In addition, I didn’t want him to be with Mrs. Carson when she confronted Shannon, but that’s all I’ll say for now.

I’m honestly not sure where the inspiration for Rachel’s dream came from, but it probably had something to do with the alternate chapter I wrote with her. Furthermore, I wanted Chris to have another encounter with Rachel, so him calling from the drain seemed appropriate.

This might be the best chapter in the story so far! It was so unexpected! I thought it was going to be a simple shower scene, but no, this was the bed scene that I was waiting for!

What’s funny is that you actually had Chris stuck inside her vagina. I wasn’t sure you were going to go that far, but you did and I love it! This is also probably the smallest Chris has been while inside a vagina. I think he should grow soon. Has been this small for a long time now. Can’t wait for Mrs. Carson to feel him inside her.

Excellent description of how Chris got stuck to the top of the dildo. In the past, sometimes it wasn’t as clear, if this chapter was excellent. I understood how he was on the mattress, then he got stuck to the underside of her foot, then she held the dildo with both her feet so Chris just got transferred to the stickier surface which was the dildo. Now, he is on the side of the dildo, but I love how Janet slid her hand up and down, dragging Chris to the top of the dildo and setting him right there on the front row seat.

So if Chris is dislodged, he is stuck inside Mrs. Carson’s pussy. I wasn’t expecting him inside there at this size, but I will take it. I wonder how long Chris will stay inside there. Will he grow inside it, like a baby ready to be born? Will Janet take him to Shannon’s place with Chris inside her?

I mean, wow, shrinker82, this chapter was amazing, and I can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Well, I’m glad you liked it. I’ve been working on and editing this for some time and I’m happy with the finished product. As I’ve said, this story probably won’t go in the direction you anticipate; there are plenty of plot twists along the way. I did have to rework a few things to facilitate the next couple of chapters, but I think I’ve found a direction that suits me.

Check back for more updates!

Nice chapter. Cris is about to return to the shower with Mrs. Carson. Is it bad that I hope that Chris gets seperated from Mrs. Carson before she goes over to Shannon so that there can be more unaware with others besides Shannon?

Author's Response: I think you’ll be surprised with where the story goes from here, especially with the next couple of chapters. Although we haven’t seen much of Shannon lately, it’ll definitely be an interesting exchange between the two older women. So for now, stay tuned and thanks for reading.

Author's Response: I think you’ll be surprised with where the story goes from here, especially with the next couple of chapters. Although we haven’t seen much of Shannon lately, it’ll definitely be an interesting exchange between the two older women. So for now, stay tuned and thanks for reading.

Been really enjoying all the unaware content with Rachel and her mom, would love to see some mouthplay or watersports somehow incoporated :)

@shrinker82,

Yes! I loved how you described her figure and outfit. That outfit generally looks good on most women, so it’s a solid choice. Love how you described her wide hips. That’s one trait that should be very different from Rachel.

Lol, my suggestion was me anxious for some action with Janet. I was thinking about using Chris directly, but I think giving him a preview of the doll will make him more nervous when it actually happens.

I saw this one giantess video online and it showed this woman leave a vibrating sex toy in her pussy and she dressed up and left to a party. Of course, since I’m a giantess fan, I just imagined a tiny guy in that toy’s place and wrote that up.

I could have even made it more scary by describing the doll as realistic and looks just like a normal young man. And what if I said that doll looked very similar to Chris? Yep, a big smile appeared on my face too. Janet could fuck Chris without even knowing it.

While I like unaware moments, I find the aware moments the most memorable since the giantess could have a conversation with the tiny. With the situation with Noreen, I loved where Chris ended up and would have loved to see her actually realize it was Chris and then decide to keep him down there. Hopefully, we get Janet to play with Chris on purpose like Shannon.

Also, I noticed a trend that whenever someone steps on Chris, he gets stuck to the underside of their foot. So, in this next chapter you are writing, I’m pretty sure Chris is stuck to Janet’s foot, which means he will travel somewhere. At first I wrote about him in the laundry room, but just recently, I took the shortcut and had Janet head straight for the bedroom. I figured not much sexy stuff might happen during laundry expect Chris getting tangled with some dirty lingerie or something, but otherwise, the bedroom offers many more possibilities.

I just have to mention that the length of these chapters are incredible and the longer the better. I love reading this type of stuff and when it is with Mrs. Carson, longer chapters would be a blessing. Part of me wonders what got cut out now.

I’m really curious about the problem I solved with my suggestion. Perhaps it’s a “where to go from here” moment. Maybe “how to tease Chris” moment. I’m really curious of the problem, but no need to spoil the surprise. I’m excited.

So there is a bed scene! Honestly, I love it when stories focus on the bedroom because it’s similar to a love nest. It’s where the action happens. And this time Chris could be a part of it. Also, it’s probably the easier place for Janet to get naked and tease Chris about what kind of body he is dealing with. He already saw Rachel in a swimsuit so he knows how her body is shaped, but I imagine her mom to have the ideal woman’s body. If Chris thought Rachel got a stellar body, those genes originate from a much sexier one.

Also, the doll I mentioned in the suggestion was probably a whopping 7-8 inches tall, so I imagine her pussy to go really deep and to be able to swallow that large of a doll comfortbaly, makes it scarier to Chris. I should have had Janet accidentally drop the doll next to Chris so he could compare his own size to it. After all, he is only 1/4 inch size. (He should grow soon, haha.)

Noreen, obviously the super fit person, so Chris got a close experience of her working out. Maybe Janet could be the horny/naughty person with the lack of her husband and we see an assortment of toys and gadgets that she uses but she never feels fulfilled after using them. Her favorite one is obviously the doll, but she wishes the doll was alive. Imagine Mrs. Carson talking to herself, describing what she would do with an alive tiny doll while Chris is listening in the background. He better hope he doesn’t get found, but we all know we want him to be be caught.

Just some thoughts after reading your response to me review. I love discussing possibilities for this story. Especially when it involves Chris and Mrs. Carson!