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Reviewer: LordVenom189 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2023 9:37 PM Title: Alternate Chapter 10–What if Chris ended up with Rachel?

Hello there, I've been reading some of your stuff for a long while now and I really liked this chapter especially. 


Not just because of the reference of the movie, (which was an awesome touch btw) but the interaction that Rachel and Chris had with each other. It really had my mind picture how the story would go if you continued doing the story with Rachel, and honestly I'm surprised nobody had done fanart for the story at all. And I'm planning a story for myself based on a roleplay me and another are doing right now


it is completely different from this and has a very bigger plot story into 


So the one best thing I'm trying to say, please continue writing awesome stories like this because its what's inspiring me to become a better writer in a way



Wish you great luck my man 



Author's Response:

Well, I always appreciate the feedback and read count. I think, if I had to do it over again, Rachel would play a bigger role in the story than I initially planned. In any case, I think it was a reader suggestion that led me to this alternate chapter with Rachel; it gave me a chance to play out a little of the scenario, and practice writing a couple of shrunken interactions that I plan on using in the future.

I still have plenty more stories to write, it just has been taking me longer to write lately.

Reviewer: Ride Signed [Report This]
Date: May 02 2023 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 37

I like the story, but this is by far the best chapter you've ever written. Well done!



Author's Response:

Well, thank you. I’m curious as to why you liked this particular chapter so much? Whether it be the unaware scenario, or Chris being brushed away like a piece of dirt.

Anyway, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Angel615 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2023 12:31 AM Title: Epilogue

The best story about giantess I've ever read! I've always had this fetish for as long as I can remember, and I've always loved reading these kinds of macrophilia stories, until I found this one that stands out above all the others!

The way the story is written, the dialogues, the texts, the cliffhangers, the characters, the plots, the stories and alternatives, everything is amazing!
I really got addicted to this story, so much so that I finished all 60 chapters in 1 week hehe but everything is wonderful! There was always something happening in the story that you didn't expect, it was never predictable at any point and I never got bored in any chapter, they are all very very amazing!
The only thing I didn't like was Shannon's ending, I grew very fond of him despite what he did to Chris hehe
But everything else is wonderful.
I wish there would be a spin-off of this series in the future, to find out more about these characters, or an alternative history of:

What would happen if Shannon became a giant the size of a building?...

Or what if Chris cringes from Rachel or Sue Ann, and they find they can't resist the urge to have Chris and play with him?...

Or what if Chris stayed with Shannon and they lived together in the Caribbean forever, as an alternate ending?...

There are many places to explore this story! You can also continue the alternative stories that are already there, like part 2 of Rachel taking care of a shrunken Chris and seeing how he sometimes has fun with him.
Or a part 2 of Mr. Carson.
You could even follow up with a bigger and bigger Shannon part 2!
There are also many alternative stories to enjoy!

I hope that one day my request can be fulfilled, as long as it can of course hehe
I congratulate you for making such a good story.
Regards!

Author's Response:

Well, thank you so much for your review and encouragement! 


I have had requests to do some more spin-off chapters, including one where Shannon grows into a giantess, but as I’m not used to writing that kind of story, I’ve put it on indefinite hold until I can find the inspiration and drive to produce a good quality chapter.


In the meantime, I’ve been working on a couple of new projects: the biggest being one my next novel: “Little, Big Brother.” (Check out the preview in my “Upcoming Stories Preview”) However, while you have given me a glowing review on THIS novel, I’ve received some constructive feedback from other readers on things I need to work on. So, for the last several months, I’ve been working on a story to do just that. It’s going to be more scenario focused as opposed to plot focused, with the overall goal being to hone the various interactions, situations, and scenarios that I’ll want to use in my larger works, as I really want my novels to be of the highest quality. 


With all that being said, I invite you to check out my other works and leave feedback on what you think, along with feedback on this upcoming work. I really want to know the story details you like and dislike, and for some suggestions on my encounters so I can focus on how to improve them and provide a satisfying experience for everyone.


Once again, thanks for reading!


Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2023 12:51 PM Title: Epilogue

Hello! Passing just to wish you a Happy New Year. May 2023 be full of
peace and inspiration for all of us!

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2022 12:35 PM Title: Alternate Ending: What if Shannon Became a Giantess? PART I

Hey! Any word on how the next giantess Shannon chapter is going? Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2022 4:36 AM Title: Alternate Ending: What if Shannon Became a Giantess? PART I

Awesome! At the size people would look about 4 inches tall to Shannon.  While I'd love to see her bigger, she will still have a lot of of footplay fun!  Hopefully 4 inch Chris will be lured in... can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

Oh, Chris won’t be “people” sized for a bit, so the compared to Shannon, he’s gonna be quite a bit smaller.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2022 5:25 AM Title: Alternate Ending: What if Shannon Became a Giantess? PART I

I'm glad to hear you're better now! Also glad you plan to continue this awesome alternate ending! I can't wait to see how huge Shannon gets and realizes the whole city is her plaything now!



Author's Response: I think I’ve made the decision to be a bit more reserved with Shannon’s height—maybe only 100ft or so—but that CERTAINLY doesn’t mean that she’s not going to taken full advantage of it and have some sadistic fun.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2022 7:37 PM Title: Alternate Ending: What if Shannon Became a Giantess? PART I

Hi! Is there any chance you will be writing part 2 of this alternate ending? It's really terrific and I can't wait to see what Shannon will do as a real giantess!



Author's Response:


Hey there,


     First off, yes, I am ABSOLUTELY planning to finish the alternate chapter; unfortunately, the progress has been slow, and I’ve hit a few roadblocks along the way:

     To start, as I’m sure I’ve mentioned before, I’ve never actually written a growth story before, so I was hesitant to just “put something out there” without outlining it and really hammering down the details. You and several other readers have expressed interest in seeing Shannon as a giantess because of her personality, and I want to provide a good quality story arc exploring it. Obviously, I can’t please everyone, but I know if I take my time — and consider all of your suggestions — I can provide something the community will like.

     That being said, not long after I posted the first part of this chapter, I fractured by arm in a cycling accident. Thankfully, it was only a partial break. I’m practically fully healed now, but the whole ordeal, coupled with a busy schedule at work, left me in a bad emotional state, and aside from jotting down a few ideas now and then, I haven’t really been in the mood to do much writing lately. Rather than try to force myself, I felt it better to take a break, focus on healing, and come back it when I was ready.

     As sort of a stop-gap, I’ve turned to posting some pics on Deviant Art, and to keep my writing skills fresh, I added some story/captions to several of the photos. I’m hoping that the photos might provide some inspiration and motivation to continue my current and future stories on the coming months. Until then, thank you for all your feedback, suggestions, and reviews that have given me the motivation and inspiration to keep moving forward and continue my work!

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2021 7:29 PM Title: Alternate Ending: What if Shannon Became a Giantess? PART I

Hey! I wanted to check in to see if you were still planning to finish this alternate ending.  Great start!

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2021 4:50 AM Title: Alternate Ending: What if Shannon Became a Giantess? PART I

This alternate is shaping up to be awesome! I always thought Shannon had the perfect personality to be a true giantess, and now it's coming true! I really hope you explore both her and Chris' psychology as she grows.  I can only visualize her smile as the world shrinks before her eyes. I wonder how large she'll get...poor cops! I also really hope there's a lot more footplay and lots of perspective from the tinies' POV. Hope will hey stop giantess Shannon? Will Rachel grow too or will the world become Shannon's foot toy? I can't wait to read more, and I hope the next part is coming along well!

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2021 4:27 PM Title: Alternate Ending: What if Shannon Became a Giantess? PART I

Let me elaborate a little more on why I don’t think Sue Ann should grow and fight Shannon. First, we already seen her Fighting Shannon in the ‘cannon’ storyline. Second, Rachel offers more room to work with emotions and turmoils by taking the growth serum.

I also fell Sue Ann’s arc with Chris is already closed and her feelings for Chris, as well as her will to take a fullblown revenge Against Shannon, are not as deep as Rachel. At least now.

Mrs. Carlson... I know she has some fans, but I don’t feel as invested in her as I am in Chris and Rachel dynamic. And with Rachel’s growth, her mother can get a more impactfull role at the end of the story (maybe Chris wil get hurt by Rachel and Mrs. Carlson will come to the rescue).

All in all, I think an end more foccused on Rachel and Chris will offer new possibilities and something for everyone to like (seeing Rachel once again truly angry at Shannon and and worried during this part I sparked the ideas I hurriedly laid out in my previous comment).

Last but not least, one questions: do you have an idea of the size this new storyline might have? Sorry, I am already anxious for more XD

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2021 2:50 PM Title: Alternate Ending: What if Shannon Became a Giantess? PART I

Coming back to these characters, I can’t help but feel a mix of joy and exitement. Rachel and Chris playing is just as sweet as the first time. And I missed your detailled writing so Much!! Took me the entire night, but I finally came up with a scenario I think is interesting

Shannon growing... there are a few questions about that. First, how big is she and what is her state of mind after becoming a real giantess. It’s easy to assume her ego will skyrocket and she will act as a dominatrix, I am sure that’s what some of her fans expect – Shannon having her way with houses or even buildings. but there could be other side effects that will settle in as time passes, like with her obsession over Chris getting a huge boost. But finding him just became a lot harder now.

So she might just go for the obvious and march back to where it all begun. It’s not rational, but, again, I don’t believe this new formula is 100% safe, especially in large doses. For all we know Shannon could be more monster driven by desire than human now.  This will put Rachel and her Family in danger and Chris once again in a colision course with his nemesis.

Shannon rampages and then goes after Rachel and her mother to get to Chris, destroying their house... buuuuut..., the growth effect start to wear off. Shannon flees the scene with Ray (still trapped somewhere in her body) and a very angry, very traumatized Rachel in her hands, wanting to make more formula. Obviously she is still very big, so Sue Ann and Chris are fast on her track.

Shannon demands an even more powerfull formula. Ray is actually too scared to argue, but, truth to her vow of protecting Chris, Rachel take advantage of Shannon deranged state and manages to drink the formula herself.

As she grows bigger, scenes of what can be described as a nightmare flashes in her impressionable mind, mingling with reality. Shannon torturing Chris, Chris begging for her help on the floor of her house, Shannon destroying their home... She will make her pay.

The growth serum doesn’t seem to stop, making Rachel increasingly unstable towards the now almost unrecognizable tiny world beneath. Thinking this is all his fault and believing Rachel will never hurt him, Chris marchs on to distract his girlfriend (putting a stop to the destruction) and convince to take the shrinkink serum.

I am just so excited to see na update from this, I tried to write a comment as fast as I could. Sorry for any mistakes or confusion, I wrote this in a hurry because of work. You can spin this ideas around as you see fit.

I think this will give everyone something to be happy, while not being just a reenact of the final fight we already know. We have Giant Shannon playing with the city, we have her retribution at the hands of Rachel and Rachel herself rampaging and having more moments with... well not tiny Chris, because she will be the one who is big XD (which can be either sweet or heartbreaking... or both?)

You can spin this ideas around as you see fit.

Thank you so much for not abandoning this project. You are a very talented and very honest writer, one of the top on this site!

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2021 12:41 AM Title: Alternate Ending: What if Shannon Became a Giantess? PART I

I love love long stories and the fact that this is long with alternate endings is incredible. This may be my fav ending yet! Can't wait for more. Love it. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. Any suggestions on this chapter moving forward?

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2021 1:38 PM Title: Forward

Hey! Great conclusion for With Great Power! Hope you have had some down time, but wanted to check in to see how the alternate ending to Babbysitter is progressing.  Can't wait!



Author's Response:

Hello,

I did have a little downtime, but I had ideas on several projects I wanted to get jotted down and start work on. As for the alternate ending...(see main page)

Now, this, obviously, is only the first part, and I'm putting it out relatively quickly, but with the exception of most the Shannon parts, much of it was already written and just re-arranged to fit the new chapter. The second half (and I'm praying it's only a two-parter) is still a work in progress, and it will be a while before I'm even close to finishing. Thus, this is your opportunity to give extensive feedback/suggestions for what I've done so far: do you like the setup? Where can I go from here? Etc...

As I've said before, this ending is going to be BIG (as in length): the first part alone was, like, 25 pages of writing, so I wouldn't expect anything until the end of October minimum. No matter what, however, I really want it finished by no later than the end of the year. Hope you like the work I've done so far, and keep checking back.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2021 5:46 PM Title: Epilogue

Hey, Shrinker! As it has been a few months, I wanted to check back in to see if there was any progress on the giantess Shannon alternate chapters? I know you're still working on closing out your other story, but how are things coming with the giantess Shannon outline? Any thoughts on timing? Very excited to read it!



Author's Response:

I wish I had better news for you, but unfortunately, it’s been slow going. Most of the progress I’ve made has been with the outline, and it’s really starting to become a larger project than I thought. I’m trying like mad to finish up my current story and focus my all my energy towards the alternate ending; thankfully, I have only have about 2-3 chapters left, at the most, and that includes the epilogue. Unfortunately, those chapters are also slow going, even with everything all laid out. Once I get started on the alternate chapter, I’ll try to finish it within a couple of months. Hopefully, I’ll have everything finished by the end of the year....at least that’s my goal.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2021 8:38 PM Title: Forward

Ah...glad to hear it's going well, and good luck with the reworked ending to WGP! Have to say, I know you want to keep Shannon manageable, but would love to see her get to 400+ feet in the city. That way Chris (if he grows back), Sue Ann, etc would look as small to her (1 inch or smaller if she grows past 400 ft) as Chris previously looked to Shannon in a great twist! Not to mention the city would be much more a playground.  Glad to hear about the footplay, and either way, I'm sure it will be awesome!



Author's Response:

 Yes, thank you for your support. If you haven’t already, I’d appreciate a review from you on “With Great Power...”

 If I didn’t mention it before, the alternate chapter is going to take place right after Rachel finds out about Chris while he’s over at Sue Anne’s.  He’s definitely going to be growing, but it’s going to be in relation to how tall Shannon is growing; that way he can end up trap with her again, possibly between her toes.

I’m not sure as of yet exactly how tall I want Shannon to grow, but I want her to be a or to interact with other people with them at different sizes relative to her: with them the size of dolls, tiny figures, etc. I’m hoping to have a little bit of everything so that giantess growth fans can find something that they like.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16 2021 3:00 PM Title: Epilogue

Hey! Thought I'd check in to see if there's a status update on the new Shannon alternate ending.  I'm guessing you won't be able to put it up until after With Great Power is wrapped up (which is also an awesome story!).  Also, any thoughts on how big Shannon might grow? Looking forward to it!



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for checking in!

Yes, the alternate giantess Shannon ending has been delayed due to having to rework the ending of “With Great Power...”, but fear not, it is in the works, and the outline is coming along, though it’s nowhere near complete.

I’m thinking of having Shannon grow through various sizes: 6-7 feet, 10-15ft, to 20-25ft; then, I’d like to have her grow to about 50ft, and then to around 100ft tall, and possibly a little bigger. Basically, I want those involved to have to experience her at multiple sizes, though ultimately still manageable. I plan to have a lot of feet action, as well as ass and pussy insertion.

It’s going to be a massive chapter (and a massive undertaking) so keep checking back!

Reviewer: wisecrack3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2021 3:53 PM Title: Epilogue

Definitely my favourite giantess story ever, I've read thousands of stories similar to it but nothing quite matches the writing skill on display here. I'd murder to see a short sequel post epilogue. Maybe Chris gets stuck due to some unforseen issue with the antidote (Running out, it spills, he's immune to it, etc.) and has to wait for a specially made one to come in for him.



Author's Response:

Well, thank you for your kind words. I really appreciate them right now considering the backlash with my current story: “With Great Power...”. If you have read that one, and have paid attention to the reviews as of late, many people did not like the ending to that story.

You certainly are the first one who’s asked for a sequel/spin-off with Chris and Sue Ann. Well I don’t currently have any plans to write a sequel, I’ll certainly keep it in mind as it seems to be a story that many people like.

Reviewer: Mr in A suit Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06 2021 10:46 AM Title: Epilogue

LOL! You got me all hyped thinking the story was updated! Ok. About the giantess Shannon chapter, it doesn't have to be one chapter. You cand divide in many chapters and post as an alternative babysitter trouble.

If I have any new ideas I will post (unfortunately, work is taking up most of my time and imagination right now T_T)



Author's Response:

Yes, as I said, I didn’t mean to get anyone’s hopes up. I absolutely couldn’t believe that when I looked back at the chapters, all the formatting was off. The biggest issue was that apparently all of my apostrophes and “”  marks turned into “?”. It was practically every chapter! Slowly but surely I’ll get them all fixed.

And also yes, the ultimate ending about Shannon being a giantess is going to be big....Like, really big!  It’s possible it might even turn into a multi chapter alternate ending. Where I plan on picking things up for the story arc are around chapter 53, when Shannon has Ray stuck in her ass, and because it’s going to be a big project (at least from a single chapter standpoint), it’s going to take a lot of outlining and planning. I’ll be sure to update everyone as to its progress.

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2020 10:44 PM Title: Forward

Thanks for responding! If you're looking for ideas, I'd suggest the below without getting too prescriptive.  I think the chapter should pick up with the prospect of Chris ' parents coming home and Shannon thinking she would likely be arrested for what she's done. She has tiny Ray and thinks, if he can create a growth formula,  she can grow out of her problems because, if she was big enough,  neither Chris' parents nor the police would be able to hold her accountable for what she did. She tricks Ray into producing it by seducing him and promising to use it to use it to restore his size to be her boyfriend.  He makes it and Shannon is, just then confronted by Sue Ann, Rachel, and very tiny Chris.  The police gather outside with Chris parents to arrest Shannon. There's a fight inside and the formula spills on both Shannon and Chris.  Both grow proportionally and slowly. Shannon grows out of the house as the others flee. She plays with the police before growing again as the formula continues to take effect.  Each time Shannon grows, Chris does too. In her fun playing with the police and Chris' parents,  she momentarily forgets Rachel, Sue Ann, Chris and Ray who escape.  Shannon remembers themand heads towards Ray's labi.n the city before they can recreate the formula and stop her. We jump to Sue Ann, Ray, Rachel, and a now full sized Chris downtown.  As tiny Ray recreates the formula,  he reveals that, as Shannon and Chris got equal doses, they will grow proportionally  and, as Chris is now full sized, Shannon must be (select the size) 800 feet tall. They feel a rumble as sirens sound.  It's Shannon's footfalls,  and her foot or something fill the view from the window. Shannon sensuality urges Chris to come out reminding him how he loved her feet and he would love playing with them at this size. Beyond that,  defer to you. Perhaps Shannon gets her hands on the second dose of growth formula and grows thousands of feet tall and it becomes Shannon's world. Perhaps Rachel grows and challenges Shannon. I'd love to see lots of footplay. Maybe also interaction with the army. Maybe there's a harbor next to the city and Sue Ann, Chris, and Rachel try to escape by boat to see only to have Shannon picks the boat out of the water and plays with it like a bath toy. Maybe she gets hig enough to do it with the whole navy. If Shannon gets the second dose and grows miles tall, she could play with whole buildings between her toes as Chris initially tries to escape and is slowly seduced my their gigantic size. He could explore the vastness of her soles as Shannon enjoys and comments on her titanic size. 



Author's Response:

Well, once again, thanks for your suggestion.

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