Wow! What a start to the new year! Im so glad you are back!

Yes, I read your alternate chapter, but since it wasn’t my vote and since I wasn’t really interested in Rachel, I found myself about to write a angry review instead, so didn’t write one back then.

This, however, is different. I see progress with the story. I see Chris deciding to be creative. I mean, riding a fly, that takes guts. Even I wouldn’t do that. It’s also convenient because the fly gets Chris out of the glass and out of the house!

So Chris is finally out of Shannon’s house. The fly is dead, so how will Chris travel? He is far too tiny at the moment.

I’m glad Shannon thought that Chris was far too small to play with at that size. I agree. There isn’t much fun when your toy is the same size as a speck of dust. Makes me wonder if she regrets shrinking him down again. Sure, she blames Chris for part of it, but I never really she her admit her mistake herself.

One thing I like about Shannon is her cruelty and how consistent she is with it. Unofortunately, that is also that same reason why I get bored of her sometimes. However, in this chapter specifically, she was ready to punish Chris by taping him to the inside of her panties for the rest of the week. That punishment sounds like heaven to me, and I love when Shannon mixes up her naughtiness with her cruelty.

Well, since Chris is making the transition to go somewhere else, I think the next step is to wait to grow a little more, and then decide to make a move. Unless something or someone decides to give him a ride.

I noticed that for this part 2, you are planning on using a lot more characters this time. I like this idea. However, I have a feeeling that once Chris ends up in the hands of Mrs. Carson or Noreen, then I probably would enjoy Chris sticking with that character for a while. I’m such a hypocrite, aren’t I? Haha.

Anyway, I love where this story is going, and I can’t believe you are back! I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I can certainly understand if you’re not a fan of the Rachel interactions: Chris and her ages limit what I’m comfortable with exploring. Plus I know you’re a fan of Noreen, but I believe other people are too, so when the next challenge hits, maybe she’ll win. Or maybe it’ll be Rachel’s mom. 😉
I realize that I forgot to mention how small Chris’s right now, but he may not be as small as you think. He is smaller than 1/4 inch, but not quite microscopic. If I had to put a number on it, he’s probably a little taller than an 1/8 of an inch, but not much. Despite his size, you might be surprised just how far he can get. I’ve got some fun things planned for him.
As for the rest of the characters, they’re each going to play an integral part in Chris’s ordeal, but that’s all I’ll say for now.
Don’t forget, besides the alternate story arcs, if there are any situations/scenarios you like to see, feel free to suggest. Or, if you so choose, I’ve started taking commission requests. So e-mail me if you have something specific you’d like me to write about.
As always, you’re my best critic, so keep submitting your reviews! Thanks for reading!